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You really need to stop copy pasting old chapters. Just rewrite everything into one coherent whole, because the past few chapters have felt incredibly disjointed. Scenes are shown from three different perspectives, yet they don't match up at all. Was looking forward to this story making a comeback, but as it is it looks like a disjointed, hastily thrown together mess.

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If he has enough time to destroy cruise missiles, he has enough time to send a lance of solar energy to sear off the legs of Sportsmaster and Bane. Cop out letting them escape

that's a massive jump, especially with how fast things haved moved to where they are now.

This whole thing felt far too forced and will have permanent repercussions, because now there will always be 'what if?' in people's minds. Ajuka, one of the four leaders of his race, would not have done this confrontation in such a ham-fisted, theatrical way. I would have entirely believed it had he managed to put the MC in an advanced illusion or something of the sort, supported by the Kankara Formula. the way you handled it though... I guess you're right, if this is how you introduce artificial tension and forced character progression, this story just isn't for me.

If you want more to do on Remnant before leaving, but are out of ideas, here's some off the top of my head: The Schnee Semblance is genetic, copy it and use it as a tool to make his Honkai/Magic more instinctive. Anime nightmare weiss can create Dust using her Glyphs, likely possible using some magic/honkai as fuel. Don't remember if you already copied the Silver Eyes. Neo? Maybe he can figure out how to copy other Semblances without eating the owners. Fiona Thyme, the cute sheep girl in Atlas, has a pocket storage Semblance I think? Soul-based pocket storage could be a decent upgrade that will work with his Stigmata space. Get some Atlesian Airships and tech to play around with. they aren't at the level of Schicksal's airships, but its's different techbase. Would make a nice gift for Welt, or later Bronya, too. Merlot is making cyborg dust infused Grimm hybrids on a private, mad scientist lair island. Could be fun to mess around with. Raven is bandit scum. Turn her into a sexy portal birb Huginn/Muninn expy for the MC, or just eat her power? Eating Oz and his accumulated memories, skills & experience would be a mercy he'd probably accept in a heart beat, if Salem is proven to be off the board. If you want to acknowledge the whole Ever After stuff and the Fantasy Tree as real in your version of Remnant, then that could be a thing. It's basically a god tree. Turn it into his own little Demiplane, with him acting as a Harlequin(seven deadly sins) esque Fairy King of it. The Curious Cat as a familiar, maybe with Neo as a meatsuit. There's also a robot golem thing that can reforge people's souls, take that however you will. Sounds like something useful though, especially in a world where people's souls give them unique super powers.