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Well, what can I say, about the translation and the speed of updating no complaints, but here to the plot of them with each chapter is becoming more and more, and along with this and disgust to this story, I certainly understand that the plot is tied to the revival of former comrades, but as soon as the first resurrected, so the plot went one place in the furnace. It's like I'm not reading a story set in the world of Naruto, but just an alternate history of Demon Slayers. And the plot, instead of being intriguing, does the exact opposite and starts to get annoying. It's a story for fans of the Demon Slayers anime.

Well, what can be said about this story. Clichéd, to the max. Here you will see deliberate limitation/revealing of powers under fictitious pretexts, starting with Danzo biting his balls, ending with equating the ninjas from the Naruto anime with their real world counterparts, which is fundamentally wrong and stupid. The author tries in logic but forgets that Heruzen has a very interesting ball, and Anbu occasionally but must watch out. Further, legacy, as they say here, is not the transfer of behavioral characteristics, but only skills and knowledge, and you have everything in a pile. Naruto is playing the retard, so bear with me. Those were the superficial cons. On the pluses, the interesting relationship between some of the characters. Original choices with the legacy (or rather who was taken for it), good update rate. Bottom line. I do not recommend to read, except for those who first decided to read the fanfic. And the rest safely pass myomo.