Dialogue is bad. I like the story premise a lot and it has been very interesting so far but the dialogue just feels juvenile and it does not feel like the author has grasped the fact that people can speak differently and often do.
TV · blazuki
His stare was creepy. Too creepy. I did not like his stares.
Movies · mark_kiple
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Webnovel 
Dialogue is bad. I like the story premise a lot and it has been very interesting so far but the dialogue just feels juvenile and it does not feel like the author has grasped the fact that people can speak differently and often do.
Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)
TV · blazuki