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I enjoyed it very much, but it's still a dull read. The beginning was good and as the story progressed the more the story lost it's luster. There's no deep story whatsoever, just getting stronger in other worlds. I stopped reading at kora arc (95% of the novel). It looks like the story was dropped too.

This is a very bland story. Au doesn't help - just wish fulfilment. His powers are not what he wished for. His system sucks - random missions that increase elemental controls.

It has been ages since I read a finished fanfic. I enjoyed it. Don't get me wrong, the fanfic had some flaws - the major one for me was that the main character steals powers like they are some sort of collectables and never use them like ever. The story was also a bit bland - I expected something more from the mc, but I guess it makes sense that mc mostly thinks about himself, you can't really call him heroic. At the end everything worked out together, but the worlds he visited left a bitter feeling for me. As the story progressed mc became dumber, but it makes sense too. When authors write about genius characters, they will always appear as smart as the author and mc having all humanities talents makes mc look cheap. His system is good, but the way he takes away people's powers didn't make much of sense after creating his nen ability. A AFO stealing powers that are not quirks also doesn't make sense, mc even used AFO to steal powers from spiritual beings... Besides that, good job author! I read your story in a day, absolute gem xd

Writing quality - ofcs it's 1/5 Updates - nobody is reading this 3/5 Story - probably good, but nobody will read this 3/5 Character design - barely average 3/5 World background - 3/5