Lencana 8
Moments 426
yeah the sofie part I accidentally skipped a chapter so it got a bit confusing for me. this one's on me
Hero drank the water continously, as he had a satisfied expression on his face. Before passing it to Sofie who had a light smile on her face as she collected it from him.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
I'm enjoying so far. it's just that this(......) are really annoying and I feel that some of them are not needed where they are
"Origin Ability: Strategic-Tactician: You are a master of strategy and tactics. Able to implement simple tactics and strategies on a whim...
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
who the hell is sofie
Hero drank the water continously, as he had a satisfied expression on his face. Before passing it to Sofie who had a light smile on her face as she collected it from him.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
author chek your punctuations. some of them are wrong and don't belong where they are
ch 0 5 "God's Acheivement; Meeting With The Hero.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
author the stuff u put between some of these sentences are pointless and don't really make sense. I'm talking about these (........),just a. omma will suffice
Before he was sent flying into the air from the impact...as he landed on the ground with a loud thud.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
if their origin name is showed I. the ranking and not their real name, then how does he know that's his brother when he didn't get a chance to see or ask his brother about it
"That's my brother...but now I also have a much bigger problem to deal with. As it seems that even within the simulation, I couldn't avoid it."
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
haha, its not like half his eye could scan the area
He slowly moved with caution, each step filled with intense concentration, as his entire eyes scan the area. He slowly made way for a cave.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
I thought this one was changed
"Origin Ability: Strategic-Tactician: You are a master of strategy and tactics. Able to implement simple tactics and strategies on a whim...
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
you sir, have a firm grasp of the obvious
Leon had slit his throat where his air tube, Artery, and esophagus are located. So the cutting of these organs stopped the movement of oxygen from the nose to the airtube and then to the lungs. Any person who had his air tube cut with the entire throat cannot be revived easily, not even through advanced surgery. Such information is well known to gangsters as one of the fastest ways to kill a person without making too much noise.聽
Rebirth Of The God Of Souls
Fantasy 路 Justin_Gabventure
bloody hell author, hiw can u just time skip the important conversation between jingo and the mc? that's disappointing
Arthur's eyes fluttered open, greeted by a cool breeze that caressed his skin. The scent of wildflowers filled the air, and as the trees swayed, their dancing shadows played over his vision, causing him to squint against the sunlight.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy 路 MellowGuy
sigh. even sage seems way better than berserker who in their right mind would choose to be a berserker. to be it just seems like a class where u sacrifice sanity for a boost of power
"Choosing Beserker seems to be the best option as it will boost my power," he concluded after carefully considering his options.
Reincarnated As A Wolf With Cheats
Fantasy 路 1st_Manga_KING
thats all I can do
For Tang Jingyan, a curvaceous fitness girl with a well-endowed figure, honed by long-term yoga exercises, Alex showed no tenderness whatsoever. The feeling of tearing through the hymen made his member tremble with pleasure. As Alex thrust in and out, Tang Jingyan's voluptuous buttocks began to sway and bounce like waves.
Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
Sci-fi 路 AllenWorker
i thinks its a bit lower
Intelligence: E+
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy 路 Zero_writer
these are some weird eyes. the galaxy looking one seems nice but the other, clock eyes, lol
The left eye was completely void of an iris and pupil, and instead the entire eye looked just like the endless expanse of the universe, complete with stars, galaxies, and nebulas, and every time she moved it seemed like the stars and everything shifted. Her right eye looked somewhat normal except her sclera looked like shining silver that glittered whenever she moved, and what would've been her iris and pupil was instead a beautiful golden clock face that was complete with an hour, minute, and second hands, and tick marks at the points where the roman numerals for 1-12 were displayed at the proper positions.
(Hiatus) I've Reincarnated With An OP Gacha System?!
Fantasy 路 KallenEmilia
really wanna see how mc torture that SOB
"I pity you, Marcus.... you've made the worst of men."
Chaos Energy System
Fantasy 路 The_Forgotten_
"he" tried to hide it
He could hear it approaching from the distance; they were footsteps鈥攕omeone was coming here. Ryan wondered who it could be, and he hadn't thought of it before, but could other people see his blue screen? How tried to hide it, but he didn't know how.
Chaos Energy System
Fantasy 路 The_Forgotten_
and you couldn't have done that to kill the human guy.sigh
Mark was pretty tired now, but if he used the Soul Spheres in his hands on himself, he could completely heal his tired energy. It was the same as eating a soul, after all. But he didn't want to use it if he was not pushed to his limits.
Mind Demon's Path of Domination
Fantasy 路 CoughBlood
"as he dropped down with his butt" ??? 馃槀 lol
"Nowhere...just trying to see the rays of the moon. It has been quite a long time since I got to peacefully see one." Zeras replied as he dropped down with his butt, while glancing at the various dark constellations, and the three moons that hung in the sky.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14