Webnovel Author: TM_Orbit - Fanfic Collection

I don't think I want to have the MC fuse with the Frieza family bloodline himself. Let me know who you think should eventually get the bloodline pill. It will take some time, since Frieza won't be so easy for the MC to deal with!

Krypton Reborn: Dragon of the Sun

Anime & Comics · VendakSoth

TM_Orbit

5mth

Posted

Ummm yk I get you have a vision to write what you want but at the same time I gotta ask why r$p3 like let’s be honest it’s not a good thing so why promote it in your book?

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TM_Orbit

9mth

Commented

No

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Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man

Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth

TM_Orbit

9mth

Posted

I think this is a great book but at the same time there’s no real progression in the story line it took 100 chapter to get to his first nba game and then another 10 for the next one I just believe you need to start writing longer chapters that’s really the only problem with the book tbh. Lack of content and trying to make the story go at a super slow pace can have readers feeling like the books not worth to read. But great job otherwise

A Chance Again

Sports · easyread

TM_Orbit

11mth

Commented

Curse teq: The art of Kagutsuchi/ this ability allows the user to gain a connection to cursed flames, these flames can burn hotter than stars and can last longer than Johnny sins. CE 3 for every sec

Also, if anyone has interesting ideas for the random gatcha I will be glad to include those ideas if I like them. You can also recommend characters for the occasional companion card mc may pull from the gatcha.

Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

TM_Orbit

11mth

Replied to weslley

That would be tuff asf, you would have to start off in a world where it could be like a whole lot of aliens that give different things and then going to like dc and marvel

Also a friend of mine keeps trying to convince me to write a Ben 10 fic but I don't see possible developments in that area that'll go past 15 chapters.

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

+1

Ororoe munroe/Storm. Weather goddess.

Marvel: Son of Poseidon

Anime & Comics · TrapcardD

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

+1

Kizaru( Light)

X-Men: The Mighty Shiva

Anime & Comics · TrapcardD

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

Me personally I don’t like harem story’ because to be quite honest it’s not realistic even if it is a anime world I don’t believe that any actual women or man would want to share their partner

ch 0 6 Quick question

To Become Unstoppable

Anime & Comics · LesserCodex

TM_Orbit

1yr

Replied to I_cant_choose_name

^1

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Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Movies · Nyxio

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

Yea

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Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Movies · Nyxio

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

what Asian is she you have said she is Chinese and Korean unless she is a mix of the two I am mad confused

The chinese beauty's stomach made its presence known. Taz wasted no time, placing a bowl in front of her. Today's course was a steaming hot dish of seafood pasta, accompanied with seasoned shark meat.

The Viltrumite Irregular

Anime & Comics · SwayStar

TM_Orbit

1yr

Commented

Yes

[Druidic Calamity]

Yggdrasil: Worsap (Overlord FF)

Anime & Comics · FoxSpy

TM_Orbit

2yr

Commented

Thanks

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Custom king of kings through the multiverse

Anime & Comics · M3RL1N

TM_Orbit

2yr

Commented

Umm I don’t know if this is correct but I belive a passive would work well a idea I made was called hunter ”in the face of someone weaker then you, the user receives a 20% increase in speed, in the face of someone stronger your will recives a 15% buf”

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