I think there's a lot of future ahead, just don't give up, author, we're counting on you! L
(not a criticism) It has a lot of potential I thought the premise was good besides I haven't seen many good supernatural fanfics, I thought the mc was good, just a little confusing but there's not much to judge about the mc since it has so few chapters. But I look forward to the next chapters
Bold Author Shamelessly Evaluating Hahaha His Own Work Well, it's just the first chapter, but in a few days, I'll send the chapters that are stored. I hope you guys like it. I'm expecting plenty of constructive criticism.
A man in debt in a reverse world
Urban · Pulchra