Kesem - Profile

ok so let's start off with positivity, nice concept love the idea and it has a lot of potential, but potential is just potential you have to either proofread your work or give it to someone else to proofread, on top of that you have to make your characters more intelligent or give better explanations, example there is this talented guy who also has a "golden finger" when he meets our mc he then without any pressure what so ever from our mc, out of his own initiative goes on and reveals that he has a secret. then we get half a page worth of explanations why he told our mc, that explanation didn't really give us a good excuse though. to summarize it is a diamond in the rough you have to polish your work.

What do you mean get his body to it’s original state? And dont worry about the girls he is not a simp