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I can see that this will probably not be a 10/10 story in the way the author writes and the attention to detail But to pass time it could work

I havent read more than 7 chapters but im starting to see problems. The mc is ”newborn” but still smarter than the mother thing (system). Eventhought its suppose to help him as a newborn The caracters are boring and the early plotpoints are sad. Why so you have a S-rank guy just randomly stumble upon him even when he checked the clearing after a being and did a short teleport at 40m. And why are the economy so weird, you tell me that a new adventure cant afford a basic inn in the world. just because our mc is an op void dragon doesnt mean that everyone is. And lastly why are the stats on every class so badly thought throght. It looks like the stats you are born with are high and leveling does nothing. Or mc is scary op at birth And everyone else is weak because if our mc is A-rank class(acording to s-rank guy) and we know that the void mother(mature dragon) knew of s-rank guy. That means that the power level is low or the gap between S and A-rank is en ormous