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oh okay this time author wrote the word system next to Erie so now I remember that these are the systems of the mom and the children but I don't understand why she can speak to the children's system as well as her own. anyways my earlier comment should have been for author to write the word system next to their names so readers could remember who these names are. I'm not being mean I promise author. I'm just trying to help a little bit. and I'm not perfect obviously for sure not perfect

I have traveled back to Chapters and I can't find out who Erie and Rika are. I guess it's possible I missed it somewhere

author has a good start on writing and this is an interesting concept of a story for real. but it needs a lot more practice or maybe they are very young because once again mother and son can suddenly communicate in their brain but no writing was made available for this new skill previous to this. which the add-ons of these different subjects can really flush out a book and add a lot of content I feel like the author will probably be better in the future and I hope they rewrite this book with more information written within it in the future

I thought I read that he was only going to marry Charlotte the Goblin from the stall next door. now suddenly there's two Brides who's the other bride?

never mind my bad, I went back and found it I know who Maxim is

author who is Maxim?

arthur. when first born they boy mushroom was green and in the very next paragraph you changed him to Blue

I want Pei Xuan for myself!!!

where the flag is planted... bwaaa ha haaaa

I would have really enjoyed descriptions of the different kinds of clothes that they wear throughout the book

zenis

and who is Zenica

is it Arix or Lily?

it's the offspring birthing system

does anybody remember how many ghosts were released originally? it seems like with as many as Yaya and turtle are killing that they're way above the number originally mentioned. I don't doubt the author at all but it's not my usual book genre and it takes me a lot to absorb so much new information. I'm thinking perhaps right now I'm understanding that they're actually down where all the other ghosts are that aren't released and that's why there's so many more?

I'm sure it's the translation. and it's so nice when an author writes back so quick and I actually see that a typo happened in my message. so it could be web novel. either way I'm enjoying your book you're doing good

author uses a lot of infrared adjectives throughout the book. what is your national language author? some of the incorrect words are so far back I wonder how they get translated so badly. but you're writing is good I'm not trying to make this sound terrible

so Athena is not an 8-year-old in her original Earth obviously because 8 year olds do not talk like this. like a 30-year-old. it's a Different Twist the one transmigration I guess

I guess I'm very materialistic but what about all her stuff in that apartment obviously it's going to be really inexpensive poor stuff but she certainly has memories and some things would mean something to her. can she get her stuff please

I might have seemed a bit snarkily a couple chapters ago but I want to say that I am so thrilled to find a story on here that's not exactly the same as all the other stories. so thank you author for that and like everyone else I sang that song out loud as I read it