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Good novel to read. Need some improvements and it will be 4.5 stars.

Comedy scenes were not funny at all. Although the scenes were meant to be funny, the way they were narrated in novel were very plain and sometimes stupid. World background was very bad. There are many plot holes in the story.

Are you an idoit? I am just pointing out that, there is no need for unnecessary massacre in the very earlier chapter and that it was first fight with humans ( like i said over a small argument). I too love MC who kills his enemies but that was along the story, not at his first interaction with humans ( this behavior is what i pointed out as psycho). First read it and give your opinions.

One of the best trash and brainless fanfic. MC says to others that they were all TV or Anime characters in his world, others accept their reality then and there on spot. He literally says their future to them, in exchange of some gifts (aka powers) - worst concept for a story.

Writing was good. Concept of story and the way scenes were executed were also good. Nothing much to criticize, except for the story been very boring and plain. It's like eating nicely steamed and cooked bowl of plain rice everyday without any curry or side dishes. very boring.......

Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.

There was nothing new in this fanfic. This is just a copy of original one piece story, where MC is just an additional character in story that changes nothing. He is luffy's loyal lackey and luffy is always strong, even though MC trains harder and has cheats.

Read only 30+, so I don't know what happens in later chapters. Story is very childish. MC acts like he 10~12 yr old. He wants commit suicide because he is evaluated as 'No Seed' without a thought for family or friends. Which is main drawback, as it dampens reader mood and makes them have bad impression for later chapters.

Although he calls country dragonland showing some racism, but i don't think there was much of problem with that ( I mean many people want to show off about their country being great N all than other countries ). The story was good at first few chapters, then it was no fun from later chapters. Plot of story doesn't do any justification to title of novel. There were not any good points to story. Finally, bad story.