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This is such a well thought of story. I'm honestly very impressed by the author's ability to give us a perfect description of the enviornments and the characters we are reading about, this author must have been writing for some time, this is really good.

Really well written book, i also love how you described the environments very well and the situation certain characters were in, i will have to say calling this book good is an understatement, i'm realy liking it.

Really unique set of a fantasy story from my perspective, and it's something personal but i found it funny and cool how you put "The End" at the end of your chapters, gives the story a dramatic twist. I do suggest you to divide the sentences a bit more, i often saw some walls of text but it didn't bother me that much, well done on this one.

This is a very solid story buildup with amazing writing quality. The concept of the MC switching to another gender very much reminded me of the manga Boku wa Mari no Naka, i really like the unique concept, this is so far a very impressing story!

What a rollercoaster of emotions those chapters were, i really enjoyed the last chapter, the author did a great job pulling the emotions of the reader, and twisting it all over. However i did notice some wording mistakes, and some paragraphs were like a wall of text which did displease me, but besides that, this is a solid story.

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I surely took my time with my review, but my this writing quality is just really good. And i am SO attached to the MC i don't know why! The overall plot is very well done from the get go already, alot of cute moments which i really like. This is a genre not everyone likes, but give it a chance and you will be surprised just like i was.

I would strongly recommend this book to fantasy readers. The story is packed with imagination, and is immersive. The MC is also loveable. So far a solid 5 stars, good work author!

This book is absolutely amazing, you did so well with the writing, the beginning was also so compelling. I personally could relate to the MC Raine so much, reading the first chapter felt so peaceful for SOME reason, i just feel very comfortable reading this. And i'm really glad you got the motivation to continue it, please don't drop it again!

A really interesting story to follow through. I'm saddened that most chapters are fairly short, it does leave me hungry for more though. But we want to see more! You've done an amazing job on the foreshadowing in the first few chapters, i honestly really enjoyed reading this. Just try to write more for each chapter,

You can definitely see that this book is written by a seasoned author, i can't think of better writing that this, especially for a story like this. I really loved reading the first few chapters, and jesus, the first one was action packed already, i really love the duality of emotions the reader feels while reading it, splendid work!

This is so good already, the author has given us an unique set of a worldbuilding that will make anyone interest to say the least, it is also made easy to read, i loved reading the conversations between your characters too!

You got me compelled from the first chapter alone, and also great worldbuilding! This is your first novel? Damn, you're actually talented. I'm very impressed with this. Good job.