Webnovel Author: GMSJakers - Novel Collection

Slow pace, but absolutely great pickup. The excitement in this story is reallly enjoyable and keeps you at the edge of your seat.

From what I saw from a different response to another reviewer, you are using a translator in which you forget to use the grammatical mark or something mentioning that. So forgive me for my lack of understanding, but I would still suggest fixing those errors.

Well. . . every book needs the right grammar, doesn't matter what type of book it is. While I could be wrong, from what I see, English isn't your first language (based on the lack of commas in your response), so I would say to maybe use Grammarly. From my experience, it does really well in using correct grammar.

This is just a shameless review from me here. I believe this book is going to be really enjoyable for you. For me, the soon-coming 2nd volume is much better than the first. This first volume is meant to set the scene for the things going forward, so if you wanna join the ride me with me, I'd be eternally grateful.

The one thing about this book that it does astoundingly well is its lack of information-dumping. For me personally, I can't stand when a character just rambles a bunch of information to you, but does it in a clever way.

The book has several grammatical errors that confuse you a lot on who's exactly speaking or whether it's the author commentating. The myth concept is intriguing, but if you could fix these errors, the quality would heighten substantially.

The characters are really engaging, which should prove to be a win for romance fans. I would say probably make the cover in like an anime style, that way you attract more readers.

An engaging storyline, a nicely done background, and slick character design make this book one to read. The plot is balanced and fun to read.

The personalities of the main characters are done really, really well, and I can't help but to be invested because of the dynamicness of the characters.

There are certain aspects of repetitiveness in the series, but its nonetheless an absolute joy to read. The way everything just flows is immaculate.

The writing quality is really good, I do have to say. The plot, there isn't much to really say so far being we only have five chapters right now, but I suspect there will be an exciting growth because of this.

There is a unique writing style that I do appreciate. When making new boundaries for certain things like this, it offers something fresh and new.

First starts this very moody feeling that just gets you in an odd way, once that I didn't expect to exactly feel. It's weird. Super weird, and I love it.

The book struggles a bit with some generic characters, which makes the depth of the story a bit empty, although with some solid world-building.

It's a fresh take, and a more interesting variation of the use of magic, which makes it for a more innovative type of book.

Editing is remarkable in this book. Like, surprising. I'm not sure if I can remember a single grammar mistake. If you want some good writing quality, this is the place.

The story does enough to get your interest, with fine writing quality and a plot that doesn't get you confused at the least. What I would suggest is getting a nice cover to go along with the book.

This book really shines with the imagery, making it so vivid and alive. The plot is engaging, and I'm sure you'll have a nice time with this book.