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The pod trajectory was not being controlled by the system at this point. So, isn’t it obvious that the system would try to alert the occupant to brace for impact?
"ALERT: Passenger is advised to brace for impact!" The system continued, its voice echoing ominously in the small space of the pod.
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??? Firstly, it’s my own writing. It’s as I imagined it. The MC didn’t see a point to respond to Hal so, after getting ignore more than once, Hal reacted by creating a construct and forcefully gather his attention. What’s wrong with that?
"You have only yourself to blame for ignoring me!" shouted Hal, his voice filled with frustration and a hint of anger. With a swift gesture, he sent the giant green fist flying towards the alien, hoping this time, he would get a reaction.
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Also, think about the how his mother was pulled away to deal with the ever changing situation of the war. Sage prepped him also, in a hurry.
As the alien ascended higher, stepping into the moonlight, his features became more distinct. His armor was worn-out, his clothes torn and stained with blood, evidence of a recent battle. The blood suggested that he could be injured, implying that he was a warrior who had recently been in a fierce battle.
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Kindly read the paragraph again. The clothes were stained not that he was bleeding. He was healed during his journey.
As the alien ascended higher, stepping into the moonlight, his features became more distinct. His armor was worn-out, his clothes torn and stained with blood, evidence of a recent battle. The blood suggested that he could be injured, implying that he was a warrior who had recently been in a fierce battle.
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Oh this was by an ai tool I used. For Images I’m using an AI image generator.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Prayer -Part 1 (Updated)
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It's not. Just personal preference. Only using AI for spelling and grammar checks. Changed the writing style after Chapter 39. If you can't carry on till then, please go find another book.
The sound was so intense, so all-encompassing, that it drowned out the cacophony of the battlefield below, if only for a fleeting moment. The clamour of clashing weapons, the screams of the wounded, and the battle cries of the defiant were all momentarily silenced, replaced by the awe-inspiring, terrifying sound of interstellar power.
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That is what I was going for. I dislike fast paced stories. However, since webnovel is a place for fast paced stories chapter 39 onwards i changed my writing style and made it fast paced. Hope that will satisfy readers like you.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6 - The Arrival- Part 1
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This story has cultivation elements. Depending on the realm the laws are either strong or weak it wont allow a saiyan of that level to destroy a world.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5- The Prayer - Part 5
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sure. thanks appreciate the suggestions. @g009ps is my handle.
While team beta was defending Themyscira, another Kryptonian ship made its way towards the north Atlantic ocean and not observing anything but the vast ocean began running localized scans of the area to investigate the sources of the discrepancy.
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Check chapter 54 again . While reading my versions noticed that I actually skipped a few paragraphs. Let me know your thoughts
ch 44 Chapter 44 - The Odyssey - Part 11
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Check chapter 54 again . While reading my versions noticed that I actually skipped a few paragraphs. Let me know your thoughts
While team beta was defending Themyscira, another Kryptonian ship made its way towards the north Atlantic ocean and not observing anything but the vast ocean began running localized scans of the area to investigate the sources of the discrepancy.
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MC? How is he open? Till now I’ve only shown Orach give basic advice and courtesy. I mean he is living in Wayne Mansion so, some ounce of respect should be shown to Bruce and Alfred. Also, he definitely cautious since he asks the AI to clean out any bugs and has his own plans. Please let me know your thought. Love to improve.
ch 36 Chapter 36 - The Odyssey - Part 3
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the style till chapter 39 is a personal preference but, after 39 I changed my style to a fast paced one. Hope you enjoy the ride.
ch 12 Chapter 12 - The Welcome - Part 3
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Oh He will. I have 2 more chapters drafts in the works I had planned to upload this weekend but couldn’t. I’ll try to see if I can upload those today.
ch 61 Chapter 61 - Unyielding General Kneels to None - Part 10
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switching to a weekly schedule. I have a busy month
ch 59 Chapter 59 - Unyielding General Kneels to None - Part 8
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A support AI modeled after his mother was sent along with his ship
Just then, a familiar voice rang through the pod, calming his racing heart. "Calm down, Master!" the voice advised. It was a voice he recognized all too well - the voice of his mother.
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