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Honestly, I'm glad Hoka is back, hopefully for a while. I love the start when there's a new team with the mc, Hoka, and Mieko. However, ever since Mieko death, the team has fallen apart. I understand that this is important for the mc growth, but he basically spent hundreds of chapters alone only interact with a couple of people like Haruzen, Kakashi, Guy and now Naruto. It's cool seeing mc with some cannon characters but the non cannon characters, which should be more important to the mc, were just being swept under the rug.

This is one of the reasons I don't like Chinese novels, fanfic or otherwise because the mc has to be playboy hotness no matter what. Like come on, you have a Kaido template. You need to be muscular, with dark skin, and maybe some tattoo. What with the "fair skin that even maiden dreams of". That's a load of bull.

That's the real world lore, like how Loki is not Odin's son but his brother instead.

lol

Overly attached to material possession leads to tragedy has some sense. However, she died not because people around were "attached" to material goods, she was just greedy and like to abuse/use people. Her death might not be warranted, but it is definitely justifiable.

300 yen is $3 ....

You're right because if it truly this high of a value, no one would go after John Wick for a handful of coins.

Finally the big boy is coming

Honestly, I know every writer hit a point of exhaustion at some point. You did an incredible job reaching 700 chapters. I'm glad that you decided to switch and not stop all together, as many authors often do. Take a good rest and do what you love.

$1000 salary!? Is it the 1900s?

I believe peverted and abnormal is used interchangeably in chinese. So, the mc is not being a pervert, he's abnormal.

shattered the Black Sword? really?

Pirates scared of storm as a Yonko. Sure, buddy.

ok, I don't really like how Shank reacts to the mc. I mean, I guess the mc tormented him before, but like he really hasn't done much for years considering how you wrote him. I feel like Shank should be more motivated than scared imo.

This is an exceptional chapter. It shows what the sinner saw when he said, "Look into my eyes." The amazing description is the perfect way to sum up show don't tell.

I don't like this chapter at all. The mc did nothing and rewarded with conquer haki. What a joke.

Now we wait 20 years for Luffy unless the mc decides to do something.

The fist of love is coming, BOYS.

uhm.... I know I don't have the right to complain since it's free on WN, but your patreon has like 50 chapters.... Anyhow, Happy New Year.