Why is he barefooted?
He walked cautiously, his bare feet crunching softly against the ash beds. Something felt odd… Those trees… On a whim, he reached out to touch one.
Fantasy · Erik_Ramsey
Why is he always using the lotus now? He was able to fight normally before as well. I mean i just think he could have killed them all easily anyways with spells and the astral tyrant. Is there a reason why he chose to use the lotus here?
ch 367 Finish
Fantasy · Esenel
Author, great job. You don’t really ever dissapoint, and I’m enjoying the story. I just want to give 1 constructive criticism, and that is that the modus operandi of the MC is way too similar to zatiel’s from your previous novels. I understand there being overlap in certain elements, but sometimes I’m reading the story and it just feels way to similar to everything zatiel did in the story of the magus world, to the point that if one read that story it would even be possible to confuse both characters. I’m just saying perhaps you want the character to have uniqueness and divert a little from the same path. Other than that keep up the good work.
ch 90 A.I. Chip
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Scythe-like talons
There it stood, the monstrous being, holding a spiked club with its wicked talons like scythe.
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
He should fight for money lol, seems easy and has tons of potential, money + followers
ch 61 Money Making Methods
Eastern · Kotario
? She had just said she could be considered rank 5
He thought about what Granny said about her being at the 6th Rank, which placed her at the apex of the Arcanists in terms of power ranking.
Fantasy · JoJoKun
It’s been great so far, there’s just one detail that bothers me. I feel there’s a plot hole concerning how the hell the Gracie family knew about Gorgo. They weren’t there and also didn’t have anyone watching when Adam and the rest fought those orcs, so how did they know?
ch 333 Fiendish
Fantasy · Esenel
Author just leaving a comment here because I read until this chapter to give the story a chance. I think it’s well written and has a good plot. I just truly hope that Adam will be independent at some point soon, i actually like the characters so far and enjoy him having a team of sorts. But it’s kind of lame to see him being dragged everywhere, it makes it seem as if he doesn’t really have free will, and that’s kind of depressing, no matter how cooperative Julius is. Thanks for the chapter
ch 101 Inferno of Interrogation
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
Why the hell did he not use the new weapon??
ch 58 Echoes of Deception
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
Organ stage, no?
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Fantasy · Esenel
Yes, great few chapters author
ch 148 Not Yet
Fantasy · Esenel
Its not edited yet, and it’s basically on every single chapter up to this point
The awful smell of the room woke him up as Zera's eyes narrowed looking at the massive amounts of impurities on his body and the dried blood on his clothes.
Action · Supreme_IQ
Dude, author… not only is it a wrong level, it said that it was already 3x last time when he upgraded it???
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Action · Supreme_IQ
So far I think the story has potential. Advice: 1. Grammar needs a bit of work to be honest, there are a bunch of mistakes that take always from the story. 2. I expected a bit more from the fight in the tutorial, it was a bit… anticlimactic. The way he killed the level 10 goblins was just too bland. That was his first fight in the book; it could have been a bit more grand in my opinion.
ch 10 Chronicle of The Game's World
Games · LittleEmber
But he has no actual eyes?
"Whew...sorry about that. It's been a while since I laughed that much." Uruk apologized after calming down a bit, he was even wiping some tears at the corner of his eyes.
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
I think you meant fledgling
Trait Description: [After learning about the truth of the world, you've started venturing upon this path yourself. You can now be considered a fletchling elite. You still have a long way to go, but you are already considered a part of the top 5%.]
Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!
Fantasy · TheUngod