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add girls like talia al ghul , diana , Starfire, raven , black canary, and many more girls . will there any breeding chapter in the future?

Why don't you change the Mc name to Ashborn It is cool name and better than the apex and rudeus.

Why not just make it a harem . Do you really need to give him one night stand with no strings attached. It will make a bad Main character who will regret choosing one woman and ignoring what he had done with the others . Why are not creating a harem for him girls like Gwen are most important character in the fanfic. You just said in the beginning he will get atleast two woman but here you are on making him get only one woman . And that is not even Gwen who is the Important part of every ben 10 series. And Alistair is not human why he have to care for morales . You have made gwen like Alistair. She is the first girl he met and you are saying she is not a female lead for MC . And charmcasteer hasn't even made an appearance for the MC . And fanfic is progressing so slow . So for the last time make it a harem or add Gewn as his woman. Because Alistair has taken the place of kevin 11 and no matter how you look at it he is the best for gwen. From thier interaction in fanfic gwen likes Alistair and she is hot in the future. Why do you not add her to the female lead. And in the start of fanfic you said there will be two love interest for mc basically a harem . And drew Saturday was there but now look what has happened you cancelled that plan and said single female lead . Author You cant even keep your promise and said that i dont want to ntr Saturday. So atleast choose Gwen and charmcasteer as love interest for him . Because first of all gwen is genius in studies and magic and they both get together very well in the fanfic as shown . And the thing Alistair done for ben giving him speech had sure made her like him and in the future she will be hot as hell. So why not add her into the harem . Like Charmcasteer as well . And both are magical girls . Many will want to see the progress of their rrelation . Relationship Between Gwen and Alistair and Charmcasteer. At leat give what you promised. And as you noticed Alistair thrist for power is growing so she can become his seal so he dont go committing any crime such as killing innocent for power . This may make him into a villan no less than vilgax and any other alien. So pls reconsider making him a harem . So he don't lose himself in the search for power and kill innocent.

Hey author why don't you add Gewn to the harem or Choose Gwen as the Female Lead she should be the best female lead you know. And one of the most important thing she is the one who has spent more time with Alistair. And many fan of this fanfic dont want to see Gwen with Kevin 11 . And in this Fic ben regard Alistair as his friend and Alistair has taken the role that was supposed to be kevins . All i can say to you that is Gwen is the best for female lead If you can add Charmcasteer to Alistair family . That will be the best. And most of people don't want's to see Kevin 11 in the fanfic with Gwen you have to solve this problem. Otherwise it will be the awkward for Alistair. Pls reconsider this and add gwen as the female lead alongside charmcasteer. Many fans want to see this . And i know you are the author but pls reconsider this. Nobody want's to see romance between kevin 11 and gwen . On the other hand many are excited to see romance between Alistair and gwen and charmcasteer. And being with gwen will put him in the good books of the Tennysons .

Hey why the hell is rath giving him a lesson. The story isn't going to develop like this if all there are chapters like this like the conversation between ben and Alistair. There are many chapters like this and the Female lead hasn't shown up . Why don't you the author add gwen into the female lead alongside charmcasteer. It will be interesting development. Many people like to see this .

Hey author why don't you make gwen lover of Alistair. She is good as a female lead . Because charmcasteer hasn't even been shown in the fanfic and hasn't even interacted with Alistair. And gwen is the first girl he met and she also liked him because he is handsome. Isn't it better to make her his partner. And both are smart people. Isn't it good to see them together in the fanfic . Both are smart people. And if charmcasteer become the female lead then relation between gwen and charmcasteer hasn't been good in the cartoon shown. And he have to take a side between them . I think gwen is a better choice. Well the final say goes to you. You are the author. But please reconsider it.

Hey author why don't you make gwen Alistair lover instead of charmcasteer ? Charmcasteer hasn't even shown up until now. I think gwen might be the better choice for lover for Alistair. Because she is the first girl he saw and met in the fanfic. And also she is also blushing sometimes while talking to Alistair and she likes him. Please reconsider it. And thanks for the chapter.

Keep working on it , it is a good fanfic