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After my parents severed our mind-link for the 99th time, I walked into the Pack's archives, clutching the diagnosis for "Wolf Spirit Failure."
"Hello, I'd like to schedule my Banishment Ceremony in advance."
Ten minutes later, my parents rushed in with my adoptive sister, Isabella.
My father, Marcus, an Enforcer, slapped me the moment he entered, his glove dusted with silver powder.
"Have you no shame? Is this just another malicious ploy to steal Isabella's spotlight?"
My mother, Evelyn, a healer, snatched the diagnosis from my hand and scoffed. "So you've learned to forge diagnoses now. You've been a liar since you were a child."
Isabella tearfully grabbed their hands. "Dad, Mom, please don't blame Elara. I'll never mention becoming Luna again. Please, just get her to stop lying!"
I wiped away the black blood seeping from the corner of my mouth, my cheek burning from the silver, and turned back to the guardian of the archives.
"I have three days left to live. Please, just help me finalize my banishment."
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I really like this story. It's very interesting and realistic as well. I actually felt Elara's situation within my inner self
The MC is so unbearably annoying. She has nothing but a self victimizing, cannon fodder mentality where she likes to parasitically feed off of the abuse instead of doing anything to get herself out of it until she’s literally* dying, and even then she doesn’t really do anything to make the abuse stop or to avoid it! It makes the entire story completely intolerable! Such a headache to read!