did you mean to put saber instead of sword lol?
He had originally intended to find a Sword Skill book since sword-type Magic Treasures are cheaper.
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Bro the first fight scene made me cringe so hard hahaha
dude I can't stop cringing reading this whole fight chapter 😅... if this is what I expect to see in all of the action scenes I'd probably skip it to avoid being cringed to death hahaha.
author letting his MC aura farm in front the male lead and his women, I'm not gonna lie i kind of find it cringey when she said he is so cool like she is in middle school 😭
It's fine, you only have 1-3 mistakes every chapter, although I think you should try to make sure any words aren't misspelled or missing. It seems you might be typing really fast that's why it's leading to a bit of mistakes. 1-3 mistakes is okay.
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hmm I'm wondering why the MC isn't taking advantage of the fact that he is in a erotica world? surely erotic logic works? hmm?
" couldn't "
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and "saw"
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*someone*
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This novel has some mistakes but it is skippable, and the only thing I dislike is the cheat the MC has, apparently he needs to chop wood to accumulate points like that's a shit cheat lol. I'd rate this novel 6.5/10. its pretty slow and chill not exciting. good for wasting time.
After I Became a Divine Monarch, the Sect Wants Me to Marry In
Eastern · The rain is pouring down.