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概要
What if you wake up with new set of memories? What if you learn that your family supposed to be from fictional story with you not existing?
What is you gain a system that allows you create a quest and give you reward?
Haruto Yuki find himself in this exact same scenario.
Series: To Love Ru, Kengan Ashura, Baki, History Strongest disciple Kenichi, Etc.
This story has mix world and the power scale is according to me. if you have complain then read the original.
I will try to make him Strong but not too Op.
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Welp, the story is so cringe for me and im sure the author is a 100% chuuni due to his writing style. The plot itself is also cliche and mc is typical Japanese protagonist
1 star for having the MC of i am the fated villain cover while your own MC is a useless beta hero of justice type .................................................................
Right at the start too many systems, abilities, rewards, points, ranks, and shops. No introduction or explaining anything, just straight up exercise, and npc thought process. First person very boring. Everything is power of friendship, effort, references to random anime and manga. Anything mc does or says is love, kindness, friendship, family, or harem related. Mc wants to learn martial arts but can copy anything instantly, and has universal level spiral abilities. Gets several techniques every chapter. System function sucks. Wish fulfillment plot, lame interactions of useless characters, street fights, nothing enjoyable or interesting.
O never knew killing your enemies who want to kill you is Edgelord behaviour. Like tell me you are stupid without telling me you are stupid. XD.
{Warning: Mc does NOT kill his enemies. If you want Anti-hero edgelord then this will not be for you.} The thing is, the MC is intentionally holding back from killing enemies, which results in a reduction of his power and effectiveness. He will let people who target his family alive? then they will try again because the MC don't kill You said "his enemies" why not kill if the person is targeting his family, i can't understand is not like the mc will use talk no jutsu and make the enemie become a ally (google translater, my english sucks)
if killing someone who wants to kill you or your family makes you an antihero edgelord, then every soldier that fought on the frontline to protect their family is an edgelord?
Overall the characters are extremely bland. I don't even feel like im reading a real persons thoights. Its all very robotic. Im half convinced this is an A.I. Story, the mc has bland motivations. Most of the characters are only ever talked about for a chapter or two then left alone for 10. Very pokemon gotta catch em all. A lot of the powers don't even fit the setting. A girl agrees to the harem then never seen again. over all had a decent start but it quickly goes downhill.
Well the note is out of kindness, the truth is I don't recommend this fanfic. That said, the system is nonsense and the protagonist's personality is not very charismatic, which makes him very flat. The classic justice motivation only works if the protagonist is charismatic or has a strong personality (since the emo hero is in fashion)
Author, if your vision of the world is like this, please do not go out into the real world or you will die of depression. the world is not it is not black or white
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Reading the Summary and then reading the chapters showed me that this is nothing more but a typical harem story. The MC is overall not really that interesting, nothing about him is uniqur having a really bland personality. The strength is just their to make him look good for the female characters.Overall, just a basic story. Nothing really impressive or noteworthy.
so will the mc kill his opponents or enemies or be a hero of justice where he doesn't even dare to kill while saying some big words like you'll dirty my hands or i train to save people to protect not to kill if yes then author just reply <yes> if not not then <no>
since this mc doesnt kill his enemies does he atleast torture or cripple them, if not then yeah no i doubt this author can actually write something good with this.
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I'm getting tired of this story. I'll explain how I feel about it. Let's take the last few chapters (First 20 chapters) : when I calculated the number of days in the week, unless I made a mistake I counted 8 days in a week. I found parts or paragraphs that were repeated as if copied and pasted into a chapter. I find it hard to understand what the author means, often as if the content has not been edited. There are numerous spelling errors. I made it to chapter 20, but the end of this chapter is incomprehensible. I want someone to explain to me : if it's Monday, why does Haruo say that the weekend is about to begin as if it were already Friday? I won't talk about how the characters of Rito and Kenichi are displayed in this story, they are slightly better treated than what I usually see in other fan-fics where they are vilified that it's annoying with the MC who is trash and a hypocrite. Now let's talk about what I liked about this story, I like the understanding between the MC and the original main characters (Rito and Kenichi), the MC's powers in particular the spiral energy.
Wow I read the review and feel very sad. People hate author just because he didn't choose to kill. like they can try again, true but can't they get punish like sent to jail or lost everything they have. That 1 way to punish them to make them unable to do it again. I for 1 against the killing, because killing didn't change chit. You just kill one group of people only to cause someone higher up to grudge again you and cycle keep continue over and over. Not to mention, they didn't really get punish for it. Many decided to kill themselves then be punish, it was a way to escape accountability. To punish someone they must know what/why they did wrong and suffer consequence for it, and that can only happen when they are alive. I won't argue against those who read story and didn't like MC for anything else though, they have their opinion and they give this a try and just don't like it. And while I agree that maybe calling character who kill other an anti-hero edgelord might be overexaggerate. But in this side where majority of MC is overly edgelorde overpower who has no care for the world aside from their harem, it might not be that overly exaggerate.
Interesting story but the biggest problem, especially since this is a fighting novel, is that the fight scenes don't flow and it's pretty erratic and hard to follow preventing anyone from enjoying the battles.
Pretty standard story for me maybe because I’m more use to “bloodly?” Story I guess,the story’s not bad can’t say for the definite future but I wanted to ask about the no killing thing is it under the mentality all life is precious or something else because I saw taimanin arc and pretty sure it’s the whole demon gapists thing going on so is he not gonna kill them to and btw is he enforcing his whole no kill rule on others ?
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