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Short Synopsis:
New Sung Jin-Woo, the Shadow Monarch, finds himself bestowed with the power to traverse the multiverse with his enigmatic System. As he explores various dimensions, he forms new connections, acquires countless Shadows, and relentlessly seeks to unlock the true potential of his abilities.
As he journeys through countless worlds, he gathers new lovers, forms unbreakable bonds with them
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Long Synopsis:
After dying, he opend his eyes in one of his most favourite functional worlds the world of Solo Leveling.
Join him as he becomes the strongest hunter in existence!
Multiverse....
I still didn't decided if it's a harem or not we will see how it's process...
it will have many dark elements as I would explore the side the world that was rarely see in the book.
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I don't own anything all rights goes to their respective writers....
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Lemme be blunt. The first and foremost issue this fic has is the grammar. It's bad. It's not to the point that it's unreadable but it's bad nonetheless. It's like the author forgets the pov himself. At One line it's first person speech and in the next, it shifts to third person. Sometimes using both in the same sentence. So, quite frankly grammar is bad. Then there's the matter of Info dumps. If the author is doing it for the word count then maybe he achieved his goal but they don't contribute to the story whatsoever. The monologues aren't my favourite thing. Especially with that broken grammar and speech. Story development isn't good either. The name of the fic is misleading. Dudes accumulating powers like a sponge but shifts to basic Jinwoo methods while fighting in the end. So, what was the point of those long monologues. The differences from the original story has been minimal to say the least. Character design: The MC is cracked. And given that this is a totally MC oriented fic(i.e. all the other characters are totally 1d. Can't think to save their lives.), it makes it unbearable. Dude has got a clusterf*ck for a mind. He's always thinking about power systems of other fics and whatnot while barely does anything at all when it comes to self improvement. So many ideas and so little execution, that it's almost sad really. It goes on monologues after monologues. And every chapter till now his only worry is about his existence, who sent him here. Like he'll tell you all about it at least thrice a chapter. And I still don't have any idea what it means in the first place, why is it happening, why is it important anyways. Maybe I'm just dumb and just babbling at this point. Updating Stability: The 27th chapter says it all. The author's demands are, you send him power stones and reviews, and he'll update. So, make what you will of it. World background: Walmart version of Solo leveling world.
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unfortunately this fanfic is not for me, I tried to continue but after several chapters with the exception of useless information, and after he took advantage of Lee Joohee and practically discarded it, it speaks a lot about a person's character. for that and other reasons I'm going to drop it, and that the author evolves with this fic and brings something better in the future.
your MC has tons of skills but each are at level 1, this is pretty useless. You should strengthen each skills to max rather than giving a three new skill every other 2 chapters.
everything was going good so far but at chapter 64 life just using girl for get body broke my heart that's the only reason I am dropping it
I don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.
Well it's not really a villain fanfiction but an improved version of antihero story, which if I remember correctly the original sun jin woo was also a bit of antihero protagonist, which is why solo leveling is hit in first place, so yeah a little disappointed from the way story goes, as I was expecting the MC to be an absolute villain.
Author just copies from the original novels and takes it as his own. Literally word for word and its absurd how he gets stones for work thats not even his.
The grammar needs some improvement and the info dumps and random tangents about mana and the like is annoying but it's bearable, and that's all there is to not like, but overall the fic is great
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The novel was butchered into this monstrosity. It felt like parts of the og novel plus a congregation of nonsense.
This novel is too detailed and detailed to the point of being annoying. Even more detailed than the original novel. (I'm not being sarcastic.) But I was able to get through it by skipping the content. But I found a new problem that I didn't like when entering the world of akame ga kill. You said you couldn't tolerate cruelty. and want to stop this cruelty and flirt with esdeath And it makes me feel miserable Because it's tagged as a villain and the mc's personality is annoying and I don't have a problem with your age because I've read many Chinese fanfics. Many of the akame ga kill Chinese fanfics I've read are better than yours. again I can't believe you can write worse than Chinese nationalists. And I've read akame ga kill fanfiction that starts in the North like you. But the way to approach esdeath is still much better and interesting. You start out like a villain, but you end up acting like a virginal anti-hero who has never seen cruelty. Your novel is boring. Your novel has a few advantages. 1) There are more episodes than other fan fiction stories of this type. 2) MC op 3) MC is lucky.
This should be called “Solo Monologue”, I bet the MC will become Monologue Monarch. Too much monologue in a chapter. Well, it is good though 👍👍👍
well where to start ok let's start with writing quality at first it was a little bit better than MTL still readable but recently the writing quality improved alot.next mc.....ok he was a retard who sometimes thinks with his lower half but his character improved and became less irritating i almost dropped the FF because of him ...update stability is good .overall tho the beginning wasn't the best it improves later and i expect the mc to keep improving and become more mature . i wish good luck to the author and hope for him to keep improving as well as to try to benefit from useful criticism to improve . It's rare for me to write a review i hope it helps.
Fic with a fairly fast plot but with "important" details that are very disturbing and too many so that the plot feels very slow, Mc just became Job Evolution in the 60s chapter, So yeah, good luck to future readers of this fic, I hope you don't get dizzy while reading it... That's just my complaint about this very "detailed" fic
New fanfi of my favorite author-chan, I look forward to the next chapters. I would also like to know if the mc will only have the powers of the shadow monarch or will have more powers from different verses. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺