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Extra’s Rebirth: I Will Create A Good Ending For The Heroines
4.28 (54 レビュー結果)
概要
“Everyone deserves a happy ending, don’t they?”
…
In the brutal fantasy RPG Fall of Ares, saving the world came at a cruel price — the deaths of every heroine the player had grown to love.
No matter how skilled you were, their sacrifices were inevitable.
The game warned you not to get attached.
But one young man did.
After beating the game and lamenting their tragic fates, he wakes up in its world — reborn as an extra, armed with one mission from a mysterious system:
[Change their endings. Let them live.]
Now enrolled at Astralis Academy alongside the heroines doomed to die, he must rewrite fate itself.
For every girl he saves, he’s rewarded.
But the world resists change.
Calamities draw closer.
The true enemy — the Children of the Sky — are watching.
And one of the heroines… remembers it all.
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This was promising at the start, but I started getting frustrated and bored as time went on. The first 30-40 chapters I rather enjoyed. The MC was interesting enough with a clearly defined goal. The setting of a hardcore world was cool. Unfortunately, by the time I reached chapter 80 my appreciation had run dry for this story as the hardcore premise felt thrown out the window entirely. The MC was not properly challenged and just given everything needed to succeed after already becoming quite OP after his training time skip. We got a couple yanderes without any proper build up. I like a good yandere, but when they come out of left field without any of the signs the lead up to them becoming yandere... it leaves me a bit unhappy. The summoning system felt a bit odd and unnecessary like it was just a bit much for this kind of story. Every romantically involved woman feels exactly the same in behavior and speech by the time I stopped reading this. The Saintess could have been an interesting element especially with her initial dynamic with the Goddess speaking to her directly, but ultimately the Goddess' direct interaction with the MC killed it for me. I was hoping for a challenged but proactive MC in this allegedly brutal world where all the heroines died where he was forced to use everything at hand to the limit to get his victories to eventually become strong enough to contend with the best, but I got disappointed by what essentially is an outright power fantasy in which the MC wins wins wins, gets the girls, gets a gold star stamped on his head for existing, and power upgrades that are utterly insane are given to him.
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Very tempting price of word Can't describe in word but like it very much ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
It was going well until at some point in the story the system became very vague, The author sometimes even forgets about the quest rewards. Other than that the power scaling is a little vague also. Except for those two flaws the story was decent.
man this novel is so good and had an interesting plot, and I am just hooked to it waiting for more chapters.
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with the heroines that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!
This had potential but it’s missed the mark. The start portrays the game world as extremely brutal with almost insurmountable challenges on the horizon, and yet there is zero sense of urgency. The mc feels extremely carefree and seemingly lucks into strength at every turn, it doesn’t feel like he’s earned it at all. He spends like 80% of the time if not more being lovey dovey with the female leads, which brings me to my next criticism, none of them are the heroines from the title. the saving of the heroines, ie the premise of the story for which I decided to start reading this, so far has been completely irrelevant since like the first 30 chapters. Hea gone out of his way to find and help heroines only twice, and one of those times the heroine didnt need help because she remembered her past life, but both times theres actually two heroines that “need” help, it feels extremely contrived and just a way to pad the list of heroines, which doesnt matter cus they pretty much instantly get abandoned by the story. Why should i care about a character with like 4 chapters of screen time max? My next complaint is that its next to impossible to tell how strong anyone is. The only time we see anyone fight is the mc pretty much one shotting everything, except the time the SWORD SAINT doesnt instantly kill some common street thugs. No one has any feats asie from the mc and yet were just told theyre stronger. And since mc has one shot pretty much everything he fights its, and those he doesnt end instantly it fails to portray any struggle in the fight so it comes off as playing around rather than lacking strength, its kinda hard to gauge how much hes actually grown. Tying into that is my next complaint. Stats and skill levels were introduced but they havent been used except for onetime when he summons something. And its not like the ideas were abandoned, they still exist were just not privy to that information. These last two points have erased any stakes, the mc wil just be strong enough for anything. Now for the specific shit, the summons seem redundant. So far we have two, one is a magic genius buts shes seven and unless the author changes his whole m.o. she is gonna be nothing but cute daighter lemme spoil her. Especially since we have another fully grown magic genius, they seemingly grow at the same pace and yet the non summon is infinitely more relevant. The next summon is a maid that almost destroyed the world with undying loyalty, but her stats are b rank and shes yet to fight anything or effectively showcase her necesity to either the mc or the plot. In fact you wanna know who has done more a second maid with undying loyalty that was introduced slightly later. Again it just feels like the author is padding and already bloated list of heroines. And finally im gonna asume this is an unpopular opinoin but edna sucks wish she werent in the story. I guess to summarize concepts and characters are suddenly introduced and just as suddenly are abandoned or made redundant, and non existent power scaling make this a below average harem power fantasy, and thats saying something.
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This one starts pretty well. Then like 50 chapters or so in the author completely abandons the "extra" and "saving game character" parts. Just your standard power fantasy after that, more or less identical to all the others. So can't recommend this but good luck to the author on his future endeavors.
author I hope this novel is 1500+ or atleast 1000+ loyal harem and a good story big and meaningful harem not only physical relationship don't drop it author fantastic book so far just hidden gem underrated pls reply to my questions
It’s decent but it’s super cliche little sister tropes, daughter tropes, all tropes this novel don’t need collecting lovers super easy powers aren’t that entertaining while his other novel on the other hand doesn’t have little sister tropes or daughter tropes thank god and I hope it stays that way this novel is kinda just a slice of life while the other novel is joking but is going to have serious when you hear about the plot this on the other hand is just slice of life and cliche again not bad but his other novel triumphs it in every way not many cliches(little sister and daughter tropes) harem is just coming together at least not yet mc actually has to train
If you like the typical isekai anime, you’ll like this novel because it’s the same. I’ll give it 5 stars, but I won’t keep reading it, I was expecting something more adult.
Definitely a good stuff. writing quality is very good. characters feel alive not monotonous . story progression is good till now . Definitely a enjoyable story . . . .there is one minus point that scenes feel fast , you left so much information and so much more potential interaction between characters
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Honestly, this novel started strong. The premise was genuinely good—fresh, unique, and full of potential. I went into it thinking, finally, something different. And for a while, it really felt like it could become something memorable. But then everything slowly spiraled into darkness. What began as an interesting journey turned into a depressing pit where the MC is dragged through misery after misery with zero payoff. Every time it looks like he’s finally growing, finally standing up, finally evolving… the story slams him right back to square one. It’s like watching someone climb a staircase only to trip on the last step every single time. And the constant problems surrounding the MC don’t feel challenging—they feel pointless. He has no power, no progress, no momentum. Honestly, it feels like everything he’s done so far was for absolutely nothing. The story keeps teasing growth but delivers disappointment every time. I really believed this novel would break the usual patterns. I thought this would be the rare one that handles suffering and development well. But nope. Instead, I’m stuck watching the MC get crushed again and again with no real advancement, no proper revenge, no satisfying victories—just endless negativity. At this point, I’m not just disappointed in the character—I’m disappointed in the author. If you’re not going to write something meaningful, something consistent, something that respects the reader’s investment, then just stop. Don’t drag a promising idea through the mud. Don’t take a good concept and ruin it with constant resets and pointless suffering. You’re not darkening the story—you’re ruining the mood entirely.
What can I say… this is a masterpiece! I love that the MC isn’t a simp, and not every character is just pure evil. I could say more, but I don’t want to spoil anything. I just hope the author doesn’t abandon this series. Oh, and please upload more images of Lillian, Medusa, and the other girls!
It's fine. Grammar and storytelling skills are solid. But nothing about it stood out for me. The last chapter before it gets locked is the over-used "MC beating down a snobby royal in front of everyone" and I couldn't even read it. If you're into the "guy gets sucked into a video game" genre and want a story where the MC isn't a scumbag or an edgelord then you're in luck. You could do worse.
I don't why but whenever i read my intuition tells me that author is virgin or a gay that's why he is making us suffer like dude first you changed story direction from title but it was fine till then but putting r18 tag while not doing snu snu dayum that is open heresy and forbidden i am Ratting 4.2 stars because it's good but have little flaws Hope you improve your mistakes author Good bye
I was really enjoying the novel until the author suddenly gave the MC another daughter. Come on, dear author — wasn’t one enough? Maybe it would’ve been fine if it followed the classic biological approach, but this ‘summoned daughter’ concept feels a bit too much, especially in a harem-tagged story. Still, I really hope you’ll avoid using this trope in your future works
Hey, I just finished reading your story and wow. Honestly, it was so vivid, it felt like the whole thing was playing out in my head while I read. I’m an artist, and I usually take commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art, and Cover Art. Your story has that special spark that would look absolutely stunning as a comic or webtoon. I’d be really excited to bring it to life visually (no pressure at all, but I couldn’t resist reaching out). If you’d like to check out my work or chat more about the idea, feel free to reach me on Discord ( Username: Eve_verse_ ). Looking forward to hearing your thoughts. Cheers, Eve.
My honest rating is 3 stars. The novel itself isn't bad, but it's basically a slice-of-life story without any plot or meaning. The romance is there and it's decent, but sometimes it feels ungrounded. The character interactions are really good, but the characters themselves are, let's just say, half-alive. **Cons:** **Lack of plot throughout all 88 chapters.** Yeah, there was something at the beginning, but by the end, there was nothing. Just emptiness. Only laughs, romance, and barbecues. **Truncated chapters.** This is the biggest flaw of all authors and a trait I hate with a passion. The author wrote a single full chapter and split it in two, right in the middle. Because of this, you get a feeling of being cut off when you read the first half. **The world.** Personally, I think that over 88 chapters, the author could have shown more locations if they hadn't truncated the chapters.