In HOTD with The Satou System

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

It started well ... Chapter 01- 08👍 good story, but MC seems to have stupid hero complex. Chapter 09 - 29 😔👎 MC became very OP, MC can throw cars as if they don't weigh a ton. MC amuses himself by murdering innocent people (chapter 28, MC victims foraging for food, protecting children and women), mercilessly or regardless of whether it is female. Then MC converse with the family of his victims (the father, mother and sister), MC say that he murdered his children and the father says: ok (summary)... [Is this how a father reacts when he learns that his son was murdered?worst of all, MC tells the family of his victims to join his group and they say: ok what? Seriously? MC is now a psycho OP, pervert who only thinks with his c*ck... not is problem but your stupid hero complex DO NOT combine.

LV 14

bigpollo

Stupid af. Edgelord incel mc and writer using plot bs to move the story along. They might delete the review but this tory is just more webnovel filth.

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memelored

the first chapter is good then it became a bashing fic i had high hopes because of the first chapter too bad this become a cringe bashing dic , the amount of edginess can cut our universe in half

LV 4

CountWatermelonTM

It's sad that the 5 star reviews are nothing but spam and you deleted all the one stars. Anyway, this is basically a bashing fic for the first 10 ish chapters and then it's just boring. You can check it out if you want but you could get the same content on any random cultivation novel.

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LV 10

AshbornKRAVKE

OP MC that's think he's a hero but actually just edgy perverted mf. Read this if you want but for someone who wants unique story, unfortunately, this story is bad.

LV 4

AStrAl_Soul

Honestly this ff has me hyped yes there are a lot of hotd ff but this one feels different ican feel it i hope for your success and hope you go far with this wonderful creation

LV 12

Dao_of_Melancholy

This is simply wow… the introduction of the world the MC is in is certainly an amazing mix meaning that it will get harder over time to survive… good job man good job

LV 1

hellen_sendan

only have 12 wives lol just toy end of humanity or not womens have a little selfesteem why a lot just collect them on the road like a pokemon just develop there personality don't stop you at the anime

LV 4

Darius_Chromwell

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LV 4

Sumeet_K

It started well. When you started adding other crossovers is when it went downhill. I was fine with resident evil. Then sone more made their way in. It became a mess of who's who. I had no idea who half the new characters were or from where they were. Then Keichi came in for unknown reason and I figured it's not going to get better. Most of my criticism is due to unrecognisable fandom choices. I wish you best of luck though.

LV 4

Sebastym

The first chapter was good, but from there it got worse and too many girls........................................................................................................................

LV 2

Dumb_Racoon

it started off pretty good but the amount of edgy bashing cringeness of mc and his maxed out pick up skills at girls really bugs me too much, the grammar is good enough and the world background is so-so, added characters are too many that it confuses me who that guy is and who that guy was? you won't really expect good stuffs here but maybe it's different from dic minds who read this types of novels.

LV 6

Dimen26

This is a hard drop, am i reading a story or a summary. This mc is a hypocrite, edge lord constantly bashing teens who are genuinely good people. It's pathetic, so far their's barely any meaningful dialogue, lazy relationship progression and subpar pacing.

LV 15

Worn_out_by

Well honestly terrible… i mean to future readers just look at the aux chapter and you will see 20+ lovers let alone a whole half a page of skills that just make him OP don’t even get me started on the world or the Mc himself that involves a whole bloody essay

LV 2

Marshall0lee

-_-

LV 3

Higgs

After reading further I can honestly say that the story is... BORING A F There was nothing more to it in the story since its all nearly predictable. You can summarize the flow in a few words. Survive and gain more women. I mean there's nothing exciting to it. The story goes like this: MC leads, enemy comes(mutant or normal zombies, umbrella corp) then MC saves the day and takes more women. Thats all there is to it. It can even suit the moto of pokemon "Gotta Catch'em all". The growth can be minimally seen in the MC, maybe on his collection of pokemon but on others heck no. The author kept putting other characters down except for the MC. You know i'm all for it with harem but collecting girls like pokemon really brings out the "virginity aura" of an author. Why not just remove all male in every world if you're going to have that many lovers? Its sounds amusing and exciting for virgins but it doesn't for those are not. I swear if I a dollar for every virgin author that writes about an OP MC who collects women like pokemon id be rich by now.

LV 14

Kiiiddd

Ends up have a unrestrained Harem that just ends up ruining the story. I am fine with Harem novels but this one got way outta hand and super early in to story too. Like the auther trys to write the MC as being all manly about it, but instead the MC ends up being a giant SIMP to all the females. He never say no to them, the MC needs to grow a backbone with females

LV 5

QifaysM

Brain Damage MC. U have more than 10 years for preparation but still. .. . Drop at c2 😂. Satou system but the ways mc using it really 😑. Totally Speechless by MC

LV 1

DaoistOwcKbp

I come with the best expectations of this new work that you have done I love your previous fan fic and I think this will not disappoint at all, greetings