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[WPC DEC & JAN 2023 [Fantasy] WINNER!]
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[Talent: Future Seer]
The path to immortality is always a cruel one to tread.
In a world where the Wizard reigns supreme and spells are everything.
Watch Aur’s journey as he walks down the path of immortality, albeit not in a conventional manner.
Muscles!
With the muscle system in hand, he forges a path for himself, slaughtering all his enemies with a punch. But in this world filled with schemes, can he reach the pinnacle or will he perish falling into the spiral of schemes?
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[Scene from the Novel]
"Aren't you supposed to be an ordinary wizard? How are you so strong?" The man muttered as the very earth crumbled, and the mountains behind him split with the sheer pressure of the giant fist descending on him.
There was no surprise the man was crushed into meat paste. Aur looked at the distant sun.
"Throughout Heaven and Earth, I have the strongest muscle," Aur shouted as countless shadows appeared in the corner of his vision.
“You are going to die today,” The tone was cold and unforgiving, with countless figures appearing one by one.
“You cannot re-establish the Laws of this universe again.”
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A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.
Amazing novel, I truly have never seen such a wonderful story. I need more chapters, I don't think I can survive without reading more!!
The title is really funny🫵. And story seemed to be interesting . More chapters author! So I can read more.
I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.
Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not
Can't really tell much in so few chapters but since it's Aurelius, I'm sure it's gonna be another banger
passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call
please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.
Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.
I will read soon, but its Aure, so 5 stars, WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Stop adding girls in cover 😂😂😂😂😂I keep coming here .........................................................................................................
Will the novel is good the writing is good and every character that comes is good not that annoying the mc is smart and doesn’t get in the way of the other mc which makes this novel more interesting and entertaining the mc characters change as time passes it’s still the same but a little different I got to say that this novel has a lot of potential and I hope it does one of my 3th novel that I like in this app I give this a 5/5 give it try you’ll love it
A bit of an eye opener to see a fellow nepalese writer to see here and i am not disappointed by this novel. It has everything i wished for and not your cliche or forced plot.
how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.
Was getting into the book but lost complete immersion when book suddenly spent over 3 chapters on a side char just 3 chapters in as i was getting into the story and mc.
the story is ok. there's a lot of obvious mistakes and shorthands that were never really edited to flow better. the chapters feel like they were split to prolong release
Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]