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This story is about a man named Putra Indra Santoso who reincarnated as Huo Yuhao. Witness his journey in Douluo Dalu's universe where he discovered and fulfilled his ultimate goals.
My Grammar is not the best, but hope you guys like it.
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I havent found much of Douluo Dalu 2 fanfic. it doesn't get enough attention as other because the last part of the story is butchered mercilessly. i hope you give us fresh and entertaining story that's better than the original. And the chapters so far have been very nice to read.
i hope you back for good i enjoyed your work i was wandering if you ever gonna make a "Katekyo hitman reborn" fanfiction i hope you do cause i love your writing and "Katekyo hitman reborn" is my favorite story
To be honest, the FF is pretty good. Great even, yet upon entering chapters 145-146, everything has become unlikeable for me. Well, the character development, or more specifically the character additions upon entering the Authors original world. I really wanted those five sisters to just be killed, but I know that wont be happening. I also heavily disliked the female goddess, Titania. While she hasn't really done anything bad per say, my dislike for her comes from the overall Arc that is happening now. Which feels and is forced, at least from my perspective. A few have shared my thoughts. Anyway, it was great up until then. Not to say this is bad, but my patience throughout the last few chapters, 145-165 (which I am currently up-to-date with), has been worn thin.
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Sería Interesante si le das protagonista el legado del dios dragón o la reencarnación del dios dragón o la línea de sangre del dios dragón????????
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this is much better than the previous one, keep it up author by the way tries to slow down the advance of strength of the MC in the previous one this was very exaggerated and ruined the story a lot, also you can be patient in delivering things to your mother
I was thinking of giving this novel a 4* but after chapter 10 you won all 5, ........now give us what we want, you know what it is. ps: I would like to ask you not to make the mc very dense in things related to romance it becomes heavy to read.
The rewrite version has been better so far. I haven't noticed any problem and enjoyed it so much. Thanks for another wonderful fanfic, Nineclouds! You're one of the best!
I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2
Solo tengo elogios para este fin jajaja No he leído muchas fic's sobre DD2 pero de los que si, este está entre los dos mejores... Eres grande
beginning of the fanfictions I did not like the mission that forces the mc to perform a task in another world when he has not finished gives the impression that he is being manipulated, so I passed if not strongly that he kills tang san
Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍
whatever you do please don't stop this fanfiction it's extremely interesting to read and looking forward to reading to the ending. You're an awesome author 🙂🙂🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Kenapa gambar nya Si Beban? Hmm~ menarik, setidak nya jika ingin menggabungkan kedua dunia, tarik The End di sisi mu di saat genting Pembantaian sepihak (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
thanks for bringing back the story please do not do like the last time since these stories of douluo dalu 2 there are not many and being a very good one I hope it arrives as a heavy ruler, there is not much to see or classify except the writing and the updates that are followed and the writing is easy to read and understand what the author is trying to express
Im giving it 5stars because it has raiden mei cover and please make her the FML pls
Thank you for rewriting this book. it's a literal upgrade of the previous one, not only in pacing but also story wise. i hope you didn't hit us with Hiatus again :(
lets goo .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. *the name in the synopsis is oddly specific
It's an interesting story as mixture of hardworking and overpowered character with system. I like this story as it has good background and story development and it's character is also good has intelligence but a little naive. Totally it's a good story. It's just characters never showed their all out powers and some scenes like that where character don't use all his power and villain have more time than needed.
Well.... the start was good. the grammar is good, the wincêst is good and there is scathach too. MC basically has a cheat system that grants him gacha tickets from ALL over the OMNIVERSE. THis is based on Doulou Dalu 2... until here is good, but then mc thanks to the cheat system, gets sooooooo many skills and abilities that's its takes more brain to understand his huge status windows than to read the chapter. MC reincarnates at 6. and as of chapter 42, he is 10 and has a literal empire in a NEW Continnent that's only 1600 km away (LOL). Has almost a dozen level 90 subordinates, a cult over 50.000 members of 100% girls under his name. Has 3 martial spirits with 2 of them being already a cheat on their own.... So yeah... its kinda boring read chapters that 30% are powerups.