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The Paranormal system!

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作者: AJPaturde

4.8 (37 レビュー結果)

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It took me time... to figure out that this mobile is an RPG System! I can't believe I can level up in real life like it is a real-life VR Game. But, why does this System brings the Undead in front of us and wants us to finish them? We can't kill them.... right?
Only if we complete all the Quests assigned by this Paranormal System, it says it will help us find our parents. I wanna find them but right now I just wanna Level Up!
I kept getting Quests to kill the Undead or to save someone from the undead, etc. I was leveling up quite well too. Until this one day... when my elder sister left aboard for her studies and my friend dropped the System from her hands- like seriously?! The mobile fell, its screen shattered and..... the system rebooted. Yeah, now we gotta do everything from the start.
We started our first year at the high school... everything was fine since I was not getting any quests to complete till this day:
[Find fellow System users in your school.]
We all System users gathered. Everyone from different classes, and different... Races. We started getting the same Quests, we started working together but with different goals.
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    Red_DragonEmperor

    The plot is taking shape. I am hooked up on this story. One of the good novels I have read uptil now. The story has potential, now it depends on Author to nurture it. All the best, Author-san

    3yr
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    Lucifer122333

    Good novel. One of the best novel I have read of this genre. Keep up the good work Author AJPaturde. Good writing. Easy to understand since there are no complicated words. All the best! Looking forward for next chapter

    3yr
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    Raeven_Black

    Let me join the slumber party too! I wanna watch animes with them~ Anyways, the plot is good, the pacing is also good though I only have slight issues that don't affect anything anyway. The writing is superb and has a great character portrayal!

    3yr
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    puukkiss

    Read about 6 chapters trying to find anything related to tags # System # Reincarnation or novels genre Horror&Thriller. All I got was diabetes alert, confusing ramblings of an MC, and a lot of things-are-like-this-because-I-want-them-to-be-so. and Characters are doing things because doing things is fun (Who needs a plot and reason, let’s do things!!!) For example, chapter 2: "Liam saw his 17-year-old sister sitting near him (...)" "Who will think that the CEO of Ohio's top company would fear a little rodent?!" A minor is a CEO... What is the Board of directors thinking? Shouldn't they be asking where is Liam's guardian who has not yet been mentioned in the story? To work a minor needs a signature from a parent or a guardian. And minors until age 18 need a guardian. If I understood correctly, their parents are away (missing?), meaning they need a guardian. Also, Liam ""Stop wasting our parents' money," Liam complained with a frown on his face." and the same Liam "Mom dad, we have go this much money there is no need for this small phone. 'Maybe I will just throw it off.' It was just near the window; my grip was now losing on the mobile when the beep sound came out of the mobile." The neighbors probably hate those snot-nosed kids that throw shit all the time out of their windows. A big turn-off from the story also was the hinted ******. Right now, the story is told from Liam's POV that focuses on his sister's body way too much. "Liam's eyes followed Rena." "(...)she moved both the hands to her perfect curved waist." "His sister's plain and white toned stomach as she pulled her top up " TLDR: Anything related to the plot happens at the end of chapter 6. Before this was... ramblings, that another author would have deleted or rewritten elsewhere. Afterwards… the poor grammar pushed me away from reading more. The only reason why I even read to chapter 6 was because of other reviews saying it's good… now I have reason to believe the reviews are from aliens or 13-year-old ghosts.

    3yr
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    AJPaturde

    Hey, Thanks everyone for giving your time for reviewing the novel. I hope this novel makes you enjoy it further.

    3yr
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    ARedFox

    I keep getting the message from webnovel ‘this book you have in your library has many chapters...’ despite in not being in my library. I have like 20+ about this book in the past few days. I also haven’t read it at all except the first line of the 1st chapter cause I clicked somethingn and it took me there. Left the rating at a 4.8 cause thats what the averge is.

    3yr
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    Lee_Ches

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    3yr
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    Jolly3630

    wonderful novel. let's review and vote to promote it further. good work. want to read what happens next in the plot. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

    3yr
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    BigNovelBigDream

    This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

    2yr
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    Garo_
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    3yr
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    Red_DragonEmperor

    The story is interesting. The characters are well written. Good grammer. Nice bonding between siblings. Try it once and you will get a good plot. Quite detailed though. Keep up the Good work Author-san.

    3yr
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    Kenlinvert_Z

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    Comeonread

    Can't wait for the next chapters. bring it fast.

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    hell_reader_boy123

    COOL NOVEL WANNA MAKE ME BURN OUT OF EXCITMENT, STRANGE RIGHT? YOU WILL UNDERSTAND AFTER READIGN THIS NOVEL YOURSELF.

    3yr
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    animelover1845

    Maybe loved this novel? yeah I did!! But at least if the author cna afford then I want more ch.

    3yr
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    BestDoner

    I like every chapters of your book and hence i like your book very much. thanks for producing such a good novel.

    3yr
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    Readerlike

    LOL. this book is hot as ****. I am just not able to stop reading it. Maybe the next ch. will not even let me sleep. Lmao

    3yr
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    sam_noah

    The level of chapters are becoming cooler. I am loving this book, maybe will be with this book until it is completed

    3yr
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    nyype
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    I wanna have slumberrrr party as well. I like the story. Everybody, vote for this one. Support AJ !!! Good job thought. Keep it on!

    3yr
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    unknowncontributer

    Well congrats I see you have made it to the top 3 in the WPC - Halloween. Good luck.

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