/ Anime & Comics / Warlock of the Magus World – Redux
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[This is a REWRITE, not a fanfic per se. CONSIDER YOURSELVES WARNED.]
Dr. Fang Ming, a scientist in his previous life, reincarnates into a world of sword and magic. Thus, he becomes the new owner of Leylin Farlier's body.
The previous Leylin was the useless son of a Viscount and a weak miscreant shunned by the nobilities. But to our protagonist, that is nothing to be concerned about. He always gets what he wants, one way or another. And he craves all the power he can get his hands on.
He knows no limit to his ambition; Leylin's final goal is to stand above creation itself. Other people are just pawns on his game board, and relationships are the strings he uses to manipulate events in his favor.
Yet, Leylin does not kill exclusively when his plans demand it. He kills for his own sick pleasure.
Unattached, ambitious, calculating, and sadistic; such are the qualities of a true villain. Such are the traits defining the new Leylin.
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**What are the differences compared to the original?**
1.- Fewer exclamation marks and better grammar.
2.- Leylin's character is way darker (his actions reflect his evil nature). Doesn't mean he won't be as dedicated or smart, though.
3.- The Chip has a true A.I. personality. NO ROMANCE AT ALL with the MC, and it won't get a body of its own. It will NEVER disobey the MC either. He basically has Siri/Alexa in his head, nothing more.
I do this for fun, I own nothing (cover included ---> shorturl.at/yDGIN)
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I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................
keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?
I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand
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this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]
Solid 5 stars story.It's a gem hiding in dirt.Read it and see if it suits your style, you'l probably like it though if you are bored of the super op mc's in different fanfics. First five or six chapters shouldn't take more than five minutes to read so you can give it a try.Also again the Author's mind is the best.Love ya Author<3<3<3
Love this leylin better than the original. Keep it up author. You are awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i continued readingand i must sya i apologize author you wrote a better leylin then the original keep up the good work if you finish i sure it will a lot more interesting then the original guys trust hes'sevil evil if helps someone his practically buying there life and then watching them suffer for his enjoyment and experiment
Very good, I hope there are more chapters ..........................................................................................................................
World building- five star because it’s a fan fic. Character design- is unique as he is actual going out of his way to be evil, except for the last few chapter where he helping bicky. AI chip should not have intelligence, I feel as though the author put it there so he could sound out ideas and thought between the AI chip and leylin. Story development- it follows the same thing as the original except he obtains a buff from the serpent in the lab he finds the Spector in. Update schedule- is trash it was dropped for five months without any notice. Writing quality- its alright it not mtl material but it isn’t the greatest at least it doesn’t have as many exclamation point.
Updated: Truly enjoying the story can't wait for more. For future readers please note that the mc has no clue about the original novel and he has a semi sentient ai system(though I almost dropped the story because sentient beings and living in others bother me I've read way to many betrayal fics to trust them...) it is a master slave relationship so it's all good.
I love it plz give us more...............................I love it plz give us more...............................I love it plz give us more...............................
nice so far, but Id like more chapters. I still give the 5 stars tho ------------------------------------------------------------------------
I love it so far just wish for more chapters, please dont quit on this, keep up the good work...... .. ..... ........... .... .... .........
I like it. It's not what I wouldve wanted but I like it. Problem is too few updates. Do you best author-san! charcharcharcharcharcharcharcharcharchar
Keep it up 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters