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|Arpious of the Planes|
|The Rise of Quetzalcoatl|
|Warlock of Wisdom: My Odin System|
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|Warlock of Wisdom: My Odin System|
|Warlock of Oceans: My Poseidon System|
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It was a cold and lonely death on the battlefield despite the thousands of warriors around me and the beating sun shining upon my corpse.
In the year 431, I had died on the battlefield.
I was reincarnated into a new world, hoping my life would be better, but I ended up in a more miserable situation than before.
As the sickness began to eat the insides of my mother, a saving grace that would pull me out of the darkness, but into the abyss... had come.
[A system is being chos-
[Interference by higher being]
[Error]
[Authority is insuffici-
[Error]
[Authority is sufficient]
[Your god has been selected]
[Your system has been granted]
[Ares System is being installed]
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Add evil Mc tag, cuz the mc is evil af. The story is great, give it a read. Highly recommended for fantasy lovers. Don't add any harem or romance, please.
It's really good if you like manipulative MCs. Not the best for people who love peace-loving and righteous MCs. ..............................................................................
It's pretty good. The beginning had me on the edge of my seat so I'm looking forward to the future of this novel. Also, hope there is no romance cause I'm not a big fan of it
At chapter 70 and I have very mixed feelings about this novel. First off, it has a lot of potential and so far, it's pretty good tbh. As for why I have mixed feelings; pretty much entirely because of how the MC is portrayed.. It seems the author has fumbled slightly when making a manipulative MC. The MCs intelligence can only be considered above average while everyone else is just stupid. Second issue, the MC is very arrogant. I will say, I 100% am for an arrogant MC...but they MUST be charismatic and strong to back that up (example: Ren from TAPOV). Orien is just cocky and annoying at points. I will say, he is getting development, but he needs A LOT at this point to be a good MC. I will keep reading because, as I said, it has a lot of potential.
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It starts fine but the school antagonist and judicial system seem too braindead to function in any society. All in all if you can turn your brain off it might be fun
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Is there romance in this?? I can see the potential. Luna and mc,Cy and Bella and perhaps Findir and Aisa?The first two looks more probable
Seeing dark tag and 200+ chapters I am ready to give 5 star for your hard work Author .Do continue and hope your work to reach more people!!
you made a master piece good job and it's one of my favorite books I'm just asking as a request but can you make a sunwukong🐵one please 🙏🥺🥺
Great Novel, currently at chapter 20 so I won’t make a full review yet. Read if you prefer MCs who pulls the strings over battle maniac MCs.
This is actually a good story , MC was trying to be a scholar when he got drafted in the older time to fight against sparta he lost and is reincarnated later on to the world however now systems appeared and with them mana , I like it quite a lot was really good just a bit weird about how MC was son of strongest mage and was born with negative stats even if he's underfed he still ate a good amount after he was free and the stats stayed quite bad . Apart from that it's pretty good
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This is a nice fix with a manipulative mc who isn't too detached and actually has friends. Decent use of the power system , however it could be described as a very loose slave system Spoiler bellow! . . . . . . . The whole fiasco with him not getting the midnight storm eyes was Pretty annoying and seemed out of place to 😕
The story is enjoyable and while the mc is manipulative but it does not get out of hand yet.
Great story, I have only read 35 chapters so far. MC is evil, writing quality is excellent with good humour. I just hope there will be some adult scenes in the future chapters.
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story is good mc is op and evil. but plzz dont add harem and ruin the novel🙏
Shameless Author Review here. So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them. The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people. The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot). Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate. These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early. Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!