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Haki?

This also forced Airon to use his body's energy to detect the situation ahead. 

TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

TV · SrCuervo

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Thanks for the chapter

ch 115 Chapter 115 : VS Yosen High VII - One Sequence to Break Seirin Down

Kuroko no Basket : The Sixth Man of the Seirin Basketball Team

Kuroko no Basket : The Sixth Man of the Seirin Basketball Team

Anime & Comics · Zeta_Faes

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There are many other problems like there wasn't any changes when he joined the 1A class, like nobody was kicked out so the number of students are odd. The romance part is forced. There is no actual plot, he just goes with the flow. Typical mistakes every new hyped authors make. If he could take his time and not be hasty about it, it would become a better story.

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How did this get 4.8 star? The writing wasn't bad at the beginning but it kinda declined as the story progressed. And I think Author can't decide whether Mc should have his knowledge about the story or not. There's barely any dialogues between the Mc and the others.

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Love interest?

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