Started reading LNs back in 2015 now am addicted
2017-08-09 Joined Canada
the novel does indeed have a lot of minor plot holes. this however, is not one of them. Mia, as of now is a minor character that the Green's just came in contact with. So it's only natural that they forgot about her when she was out of sight. it would have been stranger if they had insist to take along the sleeping girl to a battlefield in the first place. Besides, leaving her there can possibly branch into other plot devices.
ch 73 Poor Mia
Fantasy ยท Pointbreak
hmm...it seems like Sebastian is still alive, I wonder why...?
ch 73 Poor Mia
Fantasy ยท Pointbreak
They are still stuck after chapter 300.
Stop dragging out the novel, and give the MC actual development.
Why does the author keeps making the MC look like a total retard?
ch 172 Chapter 172. Divine Being
Games ยท UnrivaledArcaner
Well, the term should be "all of a sudden". "All of sudden" needs a definer as well.
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Fantasy ยท Kepalozoid
Definer missing. "soon chaos spread engulfed all"
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Fantasy ยท Kepalozoid
Another definer missing. "As soon as see them". I don't know who is seeing them; the girl with purple eyes, the audience, or other characters in the story?
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Fantasy ยท Kepalozoid
A definer is missing "the chance to a glimpse at the power". You can try using: see, catch, or changing "to a glimpse" to "at a glimpse". It can work as is. But while listening to it, something seems missing.
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Fantasy ยท Kepalozoid
THIS NOVEL IS STRAIGHT UP PLAGIARISM. I was trying to ignore it this whole time, but it's just impossible at this point (chapter 41). This novel is a relatively new work and is supposed to be original, but it's an exact parallel to the Korean written and translated work "The Novel's Extra". It's the exact same book, just with a different title and character names. The flow of this book is a carbon copy of that book, sequence by sequence. I know plagiarism is common in the publishing industry, but for it to be so blatant is just disgusting. Taking some ideas or tropes to get a novel started is fine, as tropes and ideas are simply similar and just the skeleton. But if the basis of your novel is just straight up theft that you're proud of, you have a serious problem. Not only do you take the skeleton, but you also grab the muscles, fat, and blood...not leaving a single drop behind for the original author. I'll still read, because I want to see just how much of the book was carbon copied, or if the author actually makes an effort to bring something original. Honestly, when lesser known novels are simply stolen and rebranded on a bigger platform, I wonder just how helpless the original author and translator must feel if and when they come across their blood, sweat, and tears under someone else's name...
The Author's POV
Fantasy ยท Entrail_JI