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thestatsguy: Website : qidian china
Views : 1.76million
Rating : 9.3(254)
Chapters : 1000+
Status : completed
Word count : 2.20million
author level : lv5
No of works : 2
Comments : 1199
Year started : 2016

Daoist Master of Qing Xuan
2 hours ago

Pripriri: Boring. His shadow clones is useless and mc is stupid and the most annoying is he is still 2 yrs old @.@.@@..@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@..@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.--.@.

Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill
12 hours ago

Predaotr: It's straight copy paste from translatin_otaku by the name of One Piece: The Soul Purchasing Pirate, wonder if his other fanfic are copied too

One Piece:Gol-D-Rogen
1 day ago

Dollar: I didnt read it and i dont have to, because there is this fanfiction with the name Soul System ( or something like that, look on Novelupdates and you will find it) you didnt even bother to change the main MCs name.....
You will just drop it in 4-5 Weeks

One Piece:Gol-D-Rogen
1 day ago
Hope u don't just spam that part where mc just give powers to others. Thx View More
I am in Naruto · C32
2 days ago

seob97: Where were you~~~~ Thought u dropped it

Kaiju King Among Bijuus · C9
3 days ago
Where were you~~~~ Thought u dropped it View More
Kaiju King Among Bijuus · C9
3 days ago
Just with this mc brought out his hammer??? Disappointing as the story goes. View More
douluo dalu : A great big brother · C24
3 days ago

seob97: Honestly wtf. The MC had 9 wishes and tang San still somehow pulls out a draw?!?!

douluo dalu : A great big brother · C16
3 days ago
Honestly wtf. The MC had 9 wishes and tang San still somehow pulls out a draw?!?! View More
douluo dalu : A great big brother · C16
3 days ago

Newsourpatch: Harem And pls have mc get zhu zhuqing 👌🏼❤️

douluo dalu : A great big brother · C4
3 days ago

seob97: When the MC begins to share his power is when the story gets bad later on. Why? Bcs other side characters are as strong as the MC, so honestly it doesn't really make it very interesting. See any professional novels or the contracted ones in webnovel(this site).

douluo dalu : A great big brother · C3
3 days ago
When the MC begins to share his power is when the story gets bad later on. Why? Bcs other side characters are as strong as the MC, so honestly it doesn't really make it very interesting. See any professional novels or the contracted ones in webnovel(this site). View More
douluo dalu : A great big brother · C3
3 days ago
Second that. View More

Saquib_Iqbal: I am personally not fan of mecha

douluo dalu : A great big brother · C2
3 days ago

Saquib_Iqbal: I am personally not fan of mecha

douluo dalu : A great big brother · C2
3 days ago
Boring and bland compare before your holiday. Pick up the pace View More
Reincarnated in Long Live Summons · C65
3 days ago

Seronis: 2 minutes for half a mile is a very standard run time if you're not expected to maintain that pace forever. On the other hand 3.5minutes for 800 meters (7 minute mile) is the pace the military expects even their supply clerks to maintain when jogging extended distances. So in fairness if he cant do that in 2 minutes he isnt as fit as a supply clerk, much less a "peak 2nd tier cultivator"

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C114
4 days ago

JohnPlume: Something I have been meaning to point out, even though Xiong Da has mentioned several times that this guy who stole his girl is his hated enemy that he wants to defeat, not just here but in other chapters when he is talking to Jin about his situation, he never once mentions what cultivation level he is. It's not like this is something easy to hide, at least not normally excluding a couple cultivations like that sniper cultivation, seeing how giant animal holograms appear right behind the cultivator. It should be something easy to determine yet vital information for training. If Jin knows what Xiong Da's goal is he can create a training program that most efficiently reaches that level in the shortest amount of time. If the cultivation is low he could help him quickly reach an even higher level so he could utterly destroy this enemy. He could also teach Xiong Da not to underestimate opponents with lower cultivation who might be trickier or have more combat experience (after all, Xiong Da has only been going to the dungeon shop for a while, this enemy could have been oppressing people for years). Conversely, if it is super high then Jin could offer an even more intensive course seeing as it looks like they have little time since his girlfriend is being abused. He might even train him in some strategies and moves on how to fight opponents who are stronger. Basically, the training menu will be affected by what level this enemy is. Aimless training sounds cool, but proceeding without some sort of goal is difficult. You should not waste information Xiong Da already has, knowledge is power. Also to be honest, some of these potential lessons for Xiong Da (not underestimating tricky lower level opponents or how to tackle stronger opponents) are lessons Jin could benefit from as well. So in conclusion, think Xiong Da should tell either Jin or Zeru, what is his enemy's cultivation level. They could then build a training schedule from there, factoring in they need to save the girlfriend as quickly as possible.

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C112
4 days ago

JohnPlume: Though not related to this chapter, wanted to make a suggestion for a potential cultivation method for Zhen Qing. Forgot to comment last chapter. Since she is going to be affiliated with this business, even if it does not end up working out, thought it should be be panda related. However, seeing she is a lady which is a bit more dainty (no offense meant to any of the female readers out there) as well as to add some variety, what about having her cultivation animal be a red panda?

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C112
4 days ago

Randompasserby: I wholeheartedly feel that you do not need a traumatic event to hold on to such a ****** and basic decency not to kill for fun and easy profit. Escpecially when the pressure to do those atrocious acts are just basically your mom's not so persuasive nagging.
I think that's my core issue with this arc, it just felt so unnecessary for the payoff at the end. Sure everything's not black and white but there's some common things written on the line like say, kill, rape and plunder, that you will NEVER JUST CROSS SO easily like Jin was about to do there before Ke Mi steps in.
Ah well...at least it all ends well. Onwards to more pandamonium!

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C110
4 days ago

Behemothsroar: I am writing this because I am bored and also disappointed. I will say now that this is a true ******* novel which holds no professionalism unlike some of the gems on this site. I previously had high expectations on this novel but have relegated it to my do not read list for the following reasons. This Webnovel is a great example of both ‘catering to the masses’ and ‘pleasing only oneself’ both of which are things authors are not supposed to do, and for good reasons. the author has put in almost no effort into planning a long story and just added things that would be cool and cant be sustained as a Webnovel. This arc was very poorly planned, especially the start. You give Jin a sense of inferiority out of left field to explain his laziness. You break immersion of the world by having the mc easily accept something that based on his past is supposed to be his greatest taboo. You made the highly intelligent system create an extremely high risk plan in order to fix a small personality fault when there are millions of different ways to achieve the same results. In fact, I could even say the system caused Jin’s laziness in the first place by enabling him too much. (Lazy panda method *cough* *cough*) and in the end, nothing really changes. Back at square one with an excuse to make up wildly unrealistic things at Jin’s every whim... which isn’t really any different from the systems whim, mind you. the author obviously planned this novel as a management novel where we are entertained by the different side characters going through these various dungeons and the cool and lazy boss watching everything from the sidelines. A clear comedy genre book. But then things derailed when suggestions and improvements to the shop were applied. From the chapters right before this arc we can see that Jin is overpowered and the system is overpowered and apparently this rubbed the author in the wrong way because he ran out of interesting content. We were already at the climax. Anything else he would write would be the same as what he already wrote and deflate the entire story. To subvert this, he attempts poorly to redefine the main character’s personallity by forcing it down the readers throat through yun “you actually suck and are lazy as ****” for 2 whole chapters. And then he proceeds by making the character do exactly what his new personality he just got would do and was just warned against, then goes against his entire backstory. Let me say this again because it is important. Jin had a personality but the author decided that it wasn’t strong enough, introduced something that wasn’t prominent before, and made that his entire personality. I noticed the readers defending the author saying “well things could actually be this way” “killing all the humans might be a good thing” but the role and job of the author is to write that into the story and guide the readers to think the same way he does in which case none of those excuses are based on the writer’s writing but the readers own wild imaginations. Do the themes he introduced have merit and are thought provoking? Yes, but they also don’t belong in this story and aren’t properly incorporated. This novel with proper planning could become a great story but right now is just a project that the author is messing around with and should have a much lower rating than the first chapters. Personally, instead of this entire arc, I would have expanded the world by adding an outside threat, not an internal one. We could have gotten way more character development that way as well as a larger world that the author could base new ideas on, not to mention the difficulty is a lot lower. It would even solve the problem of overpoweredness if done properly. Or I would even just introduce a new comedic element like a suspicious police man who tries his hardest again and again to find fault with Jin’s suspicious store and may or may not succeed though if he did nobody would believe him. Literally anything would be better.

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C110
4 days ago

Randompasserby: I'm still going to follow through to see how it ends at least.
But I seriously can't make sense of Jin's thought process this arc, I mean I get where you're going with it but still...

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C109
4 days ago

LittleSleepyFox: Author, it might seem like it but this isn't character growth. This is just bs. For a plant to grow, it needs water and sunlight (+ more) but growth will be impossible if there's no seed to begin with.
Likewise, to grow, a character's personality needs struggles, good and bad events, betrayals, etc. but growth will be impossible if they don't have any personality to begin with.
Jin is a blank piece of paper, you need to first define his personality before you change it. When writing about his actions, you should feel restricted by his character. Suddenly agreeing to kill people despite his past, that isn't a sign of his personality, it's a sign that he's a psychopath - which is contrary to how you've portrayed him.
If I were you, I would go back and redo the past few chapters, his actions just don't make any sense.

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C109
4 days ago

Randompasserby: ...what even is this anymore.

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C109
4 days ago

seob97: The content has been deleted

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C96
4 days ago
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Number One Dungeon Supplier · C96
4 days ago
He barely started and already thinking about harems. Fix your writing problems before asking for stones and suggestions View More

Falenor: problem of this fanfics when author only have harem minds is ruined

high school dxd (i am a SAIYAN) · C7
6 days ago

Falenor: problem of this fanfics when author only have harem minds is ruined

high school dxd (i am a SAIYAN) · C7
6 days ago

seob97: The story might be good but the way you write is very dull. Do a proper capitalisation and make it more dramatic here and there

high school dxd (i am a SAIYAN) · C5
6 days ago
The story might be good but the way you write is very dull. Do a proper capitalisation and make it more dramatic here and there View More
high school dxd (i am a SAIYAN) · C5
6 days ago
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