thanks, this is my first time writing novel. with so many comments I believe I can improve my works.
ch 13 Alchemy Exam 3
Book&Literature · SuperN00b
I think this is revenge, but not like villain that kills innocent, he just wants to trash avenger, etc
ch 17 CHAPTER 16:REACTIONS
Anime & Comics · Animelover07
well, it is not just MCU, most fanfiction usually will get dropped, cz you will not get any money from it,
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well if it were me i will give up my seat 1. because it is annoying to buzzing around arguing. 2. well i i saw my mother pregnant and it is look not easy. although i am not good people but i am not lower my self to that level. it is just a seat for pregnant mother.
However, like everyone else, Ryu didn't move. None of the passengers had thought the necessary to move. The boy's attitude and remarks aside, everyone on the bus had, for the most part, agreed with him.
Realistic · IamHazzard
candidate hinata ino afterall tsunade already auntie level
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Anime & Comics · Tuyomi
unreadable but still 3.5 star ? really
another star -1
After a while he decided to reborn in One Piece world as Monkey D. Luffy. Then he began modifying all of his necessary perks.
Anime & Comics · Your_host_HK
BS BS BS BS. i hate fanfictions that doesnt change the original line,
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Anime & Comics · XxNaRuToUcHiHaxX
i think you need to change your system panel, it is too much if you show it every chapter , maybe you can make it simpel or you just show up new skill or progress
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Anime & Comics · XxNaRuToUcHiHaxX
it is better uchiha : uh , ah, you see or "uh, ah,you see " uchiha
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Anime & Comics · XxNaRuToUcHiHaxX
maybe it is like " things have changed " you can find it in grammarly
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Anime & Comics · XxNaRuToUcHiHaxX
okay i will try to reword it, because i am not good at english so maybe i will make a lot of mistakes
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Book&Literature · SuperN00b
please beware typo
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Pain?
Fantasy · Dash_Shadows
need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more
Second Life Journey(Xianxia Fanfiction)
Book&Literature · DanteSSSx00