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I strongly recommend checking this out. - The writing quality is great, and the adult scenes aren't super cringy (like in most fanfics) -it is still early days (chapter 9 as of me writing this), but update speed has been solid so far, -the characters are well fleshed out, and -the story is interesting and well paced.

The story is well written, and has good grammar. I can appreciate a fanfic that is trying to stay away from an op mc. However, I disagree with the direction the Author has taken to get there. Better ideas would be a serious/gritty story about middlingly powerful character or a strategic/political scheming type story, or even a lighthearted story with a mc who decides to create the best ramen shop in Naruto. Instead we get a MC who is weaker than the dude he transmigrated into (after several months - Apparently, the only area the mc is better than the kid he transmigrated into is cleanliness). Not only that, but he is failing out of ninja elementary school and goes into a 6 day long coma due to a panic attack he got from an existential crisis he had while trying to unlock his chakra. This is not played for laughs. 15 chapters in and the MC has no goals other than trying to pass ninja elementary school, despite being an adult transmigrator who knows the plot of the story. No one will enjoy this. It is not fun, entertaining, or building tension, and the MC isn't interesting or proactive.