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Alright, I like the story and concept, but it’s theses sentences that make the characters feel like a modern speaker. The way the characters speak don’t feel like a “midevial” way of speaking as it is in the shows.
"HAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAHAHA YESS, YESSSSS. OH YES, FINALLY I CAN HURT THIS STUPID LIION AND HIS STUPID FAMILY!!!"
Lannister's Sin of Pride
TV · Cedric_7512
Let’s be honest here, most fanfics that end up with harems end up being trash.
On the other hand, I don't plan this story to be a harem, yes there will be many love interests but the idea is that Severus ends up with only one female.
Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
Movies · Shadow7Blue
Didn’t mean to write ”chad”.
(no harem, that goes against the character I have in mind. I'm not even sure whether romance would work)
The Monk in the MCU
Movies · Cedric_7512
Chad
(no harem, that goes against the character I have in mind. I'm not even sure whether romance would work)
The Monk in the MCU
Movies · Cedric_7512
He was not sure what he should do in this world, but he wanted to help people. At least somewhat. Being the friendly neighbourhood helper was good but he could do more.
The Monk in the MCU
Movies · Cedric_7512
Bro read what I wrote again cause my point still stands.
"Stop! YOU FUCKING RATS!" Ori roars as the people his father had tried to look after tore him apart for his Cyberware. They ripped the eyes out of his head, cut open his chest to steal his synthetic lungs, chopped his hands off for the smart links, they even cracked open his skull in search of anything they might've missed.
Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
Video Games · Niggross
And that means people should stop trying and let the world rot right? Better yet add to the rot ? My point still stands.
"Stop! YOU FUCKING RATS!" Ori roars as the people his father had tried to look after tore him apart for his Cyberware. They ripped the eyes out of his head, cut open his chest to steal his synthetic lungs, chopped his hands off for the smart links, they even cracked open his skull in search of anything they might've missed.
Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
Video Games · Niggross
I hate these kinds of comments. It takes people with kindness and Morals to make a better world. The world is filled with suffering and hardship, it take good people to make it better. Also being good doesn’t mean your harmless, that’s being weak.
"Stop! YOU FUCKING RATS!" Ori roars as the people his father had tried to look after tore him apart for his Cyberware. They ripped the eyes out of his head, cut open his chest to steal his synthetic lungs, chopped his hands off for the smart links, they even cracked open his skull in search of anything they might've missed.
Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
Video Games · Niggross
You know what would be something new and interesting. A MC that actually cares and helps people. Nothing new here you guys.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8 Tom Asks for Help? Be in a Dilemma
When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely
Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
Damn, so no better than any other Chinese MC. Well nothing new here.
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When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely
Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
Very nice.
I want to announce that I will start writing the second part, I don't want to spoil it but there will be a small time-skip, really tiny, we will focus a bit on the human islands and... well, we'll see
I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Dagon_vcg