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I applaud the writing effort, but hundreds of chapters in with still the same spelling mistakes... It's not the worst thing I've read but I hesitate to call it decent as well. You tend to throw in new characters and it's rough to determine if they are actually important or just side characters since you write all of them with the same gravitas. That's not an issue if the plot isn't just randomly something happens, but instead there's a disconnect on plot progression making this story seems more like a parody/comedy just with more murder. Regardless, is it a fun read? Not really no. Fights are shouting matches until the other guy loses it and then dies. Jokes doesn't land as well as it should seeing how it tends to lean on common tropes without actually describing it like a second-, third-hand story that lost the setup and rushes to the punchline. Drama is...well, it's comparable to most shonen tagged shows so make of that what you will. It's like... "Eminence in the Shadow at home" is the most flattering description I could make, but it's a low bar to pass with how few similar stories there are.
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I applaud the writing effort, but hundreds of chapters in with still the same spelling mistakes... It's not the worst thing I've read but I hesitate to call it decent as well. You tend to throw in new characters and it's rough to determine if they are actually important or just side characters since you write all of them with the same gravitas. That's not an issue if the plot isn't just randomly something happens, but instead there's a disconnect on plot progression making this story seems more like a parody/comedy just with more murder. Regardless, is it a fun read? Not really no. Fights are shouting matches until the other guy loses it and then dies. Jokes doesn't land as well as it should seeing how it tends to lean on common tropes without actually describing it like a second-, third-hand story that lost the setup and rushes to the punchline. Drama is...well, it's comparable to most shonen tagged shows so make of that what you will. It's like... "Eminence in the Shadow at home" is the most flattering description I could make, but it's a low bar to pass with how few similar stories there are.
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Super tired old overpowered characters? It's usually the other way around with too many sue-like young prodigies who somehow know better how to use their op powers than god.