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This fails in all aspects. It not only miseducates young readers and teaches them wrong ideas regarding medicine and medical emergencies it is also plagued with filler content and has a barely coherent plot. Characters are basically flat, unentertaining and the translation doesn't do justice to what's supposed to be the comedic effect of the original mandarin dialogues/interaction.

Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.