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Cool well my main advice is when writing you must think of what emotion and what image you want people to see and feel when they read it’s a good trick to remove wayward ideas and getting to the meat as it were View More

Ryan_Colman: I read all comments and try to implement them i just don't want to rush the story or the books right now I'm at close to 40 thousand words and I'm not even half done with the first Harry potter book which is 70k words I'm trying to make it long and enjoyable

My Multiverse Trip · C6
2 hours ago
Well comments like this are what help someone refine their story’s and it’s the best place to crowdsource ideas and think tank if you will obviously you will find both good and bad ideas on these things just keep an open mind to criticism View More

Ryan_Colman: He gets friendly with the weasely a little further on with play dates and you have to realize I literally wrote at these chapters in about 2 days off the top of my head nonstop I still have to go back occasionally and fix small things

My Multiverse Trip · C6
3 hours ago
... actually her name dose change when she is in different forms this is an established fact it’s not a matter of opinion View More

FinalPath: You are welcome!

FGO: Evil God · C29
5 hours ago
I’m sorry but the prophecy states that one can only die by the hand of the other it’s not like it’s saying Harry must contribute dude it’s say Harry or voldysnort must kill eachother their is no other way of interpreting that it’s pretty clear and dry I mean he can come in while Harry is down in the spirit world talking to death and allowing voldy to take his place but that’s the only way he can kill him without messing with fate View More

Havoc76: Fate only demands that Harry Potter have a hand in killing Voldemort. She doesn't care about how. The MC could just trap Voldemort and demand Harry execute him.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C80
5 hours ago
I mean wouldn’t it be better to just time skip if you want him to interact with Luna this quickly or just have have interact with the Weasley twins if you want him to have friends View More

Ryan_Colman: Yes I plan for a slow build harem and I'll work on making it cleaner I literally just wrote all these chapters by hand today freestyle my friend lol

My Multiverse Trip · C6
1 day ago
...Luna is a year younger then Harry Potter so why would the love goods be having a baby now? View More

Ryan_Colman: Yes I plan for a slow build harem and I'll work on making it cleaner I literally just wrote all these chapters by hand today freestyle my friend lol

My Multiverse Trip · C6
1 day ago
And the most important this as a writer that you seem to have been ignoring is that as a writer the stories you tell should immerse people into them and make it so the believe what they are reading now tell me if you had read what you wrote would you believe it and Ben able to imagine it happing View More

EJBonifacio1221: I didn't know how to put this on words, yes of course sir there's a plothole but since he used enchantments to give access to them by having the enchanment to the magic stone. It is a magical world so the magic stones were supplying those needs through enchantments like how a sword become a magic sword because of embedded with a magic stone enchanted with a specific functions.

Fall In The World Of Myths · C8
1 day ago
Lastly it’s fin if you don’t wanna go into details about magic and keep it simple but this was just insulting our intelligence man View More

EJBonifacio1221: I didn't know how to put this on words, yes of course sir there's a plothole but since he used enchantments to give access to them by having the enchanment to the magic stone. It is a magical world so the magic stones were supplying those needs through enchantments like how a sword become a magic sword because of embedded with a magic stone enchanted with a specific functions.

Fall In The World Of Myths · C8
1 day ago
Dude it’s not the same with swords that get enchanted they have to be specific like the have to have a special metal that can handle enchantment then they have either runes inscribed that have special meaning like Norse runes that can be used to mean ice then when someone puts in magic into the rune the ice magic works giving the effect or the other type is when using mana crystals to store magic then using that to power the rune but here it’s non of that even if we can say he used a electric rune to power the the phone the phone would blow up because it’s not regulated like what happens in Shazam the movie and the fact the signal is not actually depending on the phone but the network provider so no matter what he would never get signal unless he can actually open a portal back to earth which he can’t this isint just a plot hole it’s lazy writing my friend come up with better ideas make your character work like if he made a satellite that he could send back that can bridge the gap or if he creates his own net work somehow I’m just saying man View More

EJBonifacio1221: I didn't know how to put this on words, yes of course sir there's a plothole but since he used enchantments to give access to them by having the enchanment to the magic stone. It is a magical world so the magic stones were supplying those needs through enchantments like how a sword become a magic sword because of embedded with a magic stone enchanted with a specific functions.

Fall In The World Of Myths · C8
1 day ago
Lol 😂 if the signal goes all the way to earth how slow would it be to cross dimensions into another universe and we aren’t talking galaxies or star systems but a completely different universe in a completely different dimension that has mana in the air that will interfere with the radio signal that lets people have network View More
Fall In The World Of Myths · C8
1 day ago
Yer let’s just ignore the fact that to kill voldysnot you would have to kill Harry Potter View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C80
3 days ago
Moments like this being an alchemist and making your own medicine makes a lot of sense View More
The Unknown God · C18
3 days ago
Tailor over alchemy that’s insane and not in a good way View More
The Unknown God · C16
3 days ago
Well it’s reliable if you use it as a reference point on what would be the best way to help your world, but it’s not great to just rip out a single verse and use that as doctrine that’s just nuts 🥜 because it’s not in the right context and we have no idea if these Goddlings will end up like Zeus or other misbehaving deity’s. View More

Joelson_Trindade: in fact it is not a very reliable source even

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Really cool I’m not saying I’m right about everything I’m just saying using the bible as source for laws and rules is not such a great idea because the rules that came came after people had experienced both the good and the bad and these laws were used to help guide people and not bring bondage Biblically speaking what happened before the death of Christ had little consequences considering how JC went to hell and brought people who believed in him out to heaven so everyone in hell at that time had a chance to receive salvation but I digress View More

Joelson_Trindade: I understand

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
That is also another problem it has nothing to do with polygamy itself it’s more of a issue of why they are polygamist it’s political and has nothing to do with being Polyamorous View More

Joelson_Trindade: it may be but the conclusion would come to be in any way pologamy generally (countries of the middle east where it is more common) does not occur because of love for more than one but rather wives being only a sexual object (being sold by their families, or bought by their husbands) that must satisfy the will of her husband nothing more or less therefore the idea of ​​harem is more linked to pleasure than the idea of ​​polyamory

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
That’s the problem what if they find other people they want to marry and having sex with someone else whilst married is cheating that is a bad thing might I add View More

Joelson_Trindade: I understand, but still there was almost none that Zeus cared for, most of them were for rape and then if they had a child he would be persecuted out of jealousy, something else that the law he created prevented him not prevented him from having sex with humans or other species but getting married can only be one I don't see a problem, they spend a period together if they realize they are not so compatible they will not continue because they would not be able to divorce

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Did you know that with out one of the world wars we wouldn’t have computers or penicillin (antibiotics) for that matter you have to stop looking at this as how humans look at it you should understand that when one dies they enter judgement for their actions and are givin opportunity to be reborn so as a god although their death might harm mortal emotions but as long as it brings change to the world war can be a good thing View More

Joelson_Trindade: going back to the idea of ​​genocide, humans would only lose, I know that bad things help to evolve, but not all, because if they all helped humans to evolve, we would have cities with earthquake or tornado countermeasures and not the only solution would be to lose everything and if hide because we do this since the primordial ages

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
War bring blacksmiths and inventors out and even more it brings doctors and medicine to the forefront of the things that are a necessary and don’t forget necessity is the mother of invention View More

Joelson_Trindade: going back to the idea of ​​genocide, humans would only lose, I know that bad things help to evolve, but not all, because if they all helped humans to evolve, we would have cities with earthquake or tornado countermeasures and not the only solution would be to lose everything and if hide because we do this since the primordial ages

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
So that’s what you control if gods can’t manifest in the mortal realm with strength beyond a hero or at all it wouldn’t be as bad as you make it out to Ben View More

Joelson_Trindade: going back to the idea of ​​genocide, humans would only lose, I know that bad things help to evolve, but not all, because if they all helped humans to evolve, we would have cities with earthquake or tornado countermeasures and not the only solution would be to lose everything and if hide because we do this since the primordial ages

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Huh Odins horse is the child of Loki who was it bred for Odin to sleep with it View More

Joelson_Trindade: yes but i didn't say that odin slept i said his horses were bred for this

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Who are these miraculous heroes because what I know is that necessity is the mother of invention View More

Joelson_Trindade: Mano ai disagree heroes and muses appeared in times of peace beyond the prosperous land whether in knowledge or in self-assessment if it were only by war philosophers would not say that leisure is the mother of all knowledge

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Lol so what it’s not a bad thing as long as it’s controlled and it would push humans to be better and stronger and maybe smarter but let’s behonest if you want humans to grow you need to put pressure on them and lastly even if they hate the divine humans will never be able to truly kill them and thinking otherwise is just living in fear View More

Joelson_Trindade: but if it is gods against human, doesn’t any think also arise while human heroes were at war divine?

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Ha that’s your problem your stuck believing that sex would open up to bad things this is my point exactly and you have finally said it and FYI the only thing that makes a good marriage is honesty, truthfulness, acceptance and forgiveness if you can get this your marriage will be some much better you would have to fear and you would enjoy to love one another and not freaking out about being freaky View More

Joelson_Trindade: well I think you did not understand the idea but I will repeat then incestuous relationships open up for promescuity besides that if a relationship is only paired in sex I feel sorry for your spouse, because anybody can and some even better than another, yes sexual relations is a part of the relationship but not the main one for that reason the stories of zeus seems much more that of an orgy than a mythology where only those who lose are the humans being used every time a god feels like it and left to his Bel pleasure an example it is the story of Leda who was the wife of King Tindar. One day, Zeus turned into a swan to protect the woman from an eagle's attack, and then they had sex. The woman got pregnant and ended up laying two eggs an interesting thing is also the story of Dânae's father, who heard of an oracle that, in the future, would be killed by one of his grandchildren. Before the woman even had a child, he decided to lock her up in a bronze prison. Zeus, who loved to transform and visit Earth, took the form of a golden shower to gain access to the prison, where he impregnated the woman. Dânae's son was Perseus, who killed Medusa and his grandfather himself, this one, by a very peculiar accident, did not even have a happy ending or almost since the medusa was raped by Poiseidon and was punished by Athena shortly thereafter. I can also bring stories where gods fall in love with their daughters but it makes my comments too long

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Please tell me what JC says about polygamy. And lastly you do realise that polygamy would never work for none mortals and for mortals it only works because the time was right if I was being 2thnd years ago I would have to have more then one wife to have many children so my bloodline would go on type of thing View More

Joelson_Trindade: in the new testament yes😔👍

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
No they weren’t and don’t try to sugar coat it View More

Joelson_Trindade: In fact, the number of people was scarce in the world at that time and the place where they were was almost uninhabited to find husbands was a task that dismissed more resources than the possibility of a solution then logic but in a world where beings can be created with thought, sexoseria would be just for pleasure even though I had no reason to procreate (which is the instinct that makes the idea of ​​pleasure when having sex exist) in no time soon situations of gods bringing back half the world would be more than normal

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Dude he is scared of sex period View More

Joelson_Trindade: and again the story is not so much that he avoided the idea of ​​sexual intercourse in his descriptions (just mentioning the events that are rare but do not interfere in the evolution of the world so much that the gods were frightened by the enormous possibility of human evolution )

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
I never said biblical rules don’t make sense I’m saying the silly rules used here are a gross misconception of biblical rules View More

Joelson_Trindade: so you proved that I'm right again

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Really so only allowing people to marry one person and staying married to that one person or only being able to have sex with one person ever man this is serial monogamy lol this is a forced thing it’s not something they come into conclusion by them selfs View More

Joelson_Trindade: And it is allowed if it were not there would be no Laws because they followed regardless of the existing road so if it exists it can be circumvented but if it ends up with irreversible damage

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
Dude sex is about both pleasure and or love if he is worried about gods going around raping people he should make it impossible for that to happen but for the most part although Zeus did take advantage of some women others he took care of and they fell in love with him it wasn’t forced im not saying he is a great father or husband for that matter but again this is why divorce is a good thing for divine beings but here it’s being outlawed lol I find this the most funniest 🤣 part just coz the stay married doesn’t mean they can’t fight each other infact they would be more inclined to fighting each other if they have to stay in an eternal marriage with someone’s they truly want to separate from that is what would bring more wars between temples then anything else View More

Joelson_Trindade: I don't think working with achism is very vague I'm sure history like that of zeus and their relationships or the Egyptians prove this if the man who demands the relationship is stronger the goddess (or nymph) can do nothing but give in, I can bring stories where it is repeated over and over again where there is no love involved just the idea of ​​pleasure

If I were a Creator · C14
4 days ago
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