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male LV 13

I hate endings so I barely finish novels.

2017-06-09 Joined United States

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Vast Sea Cosmic Shroud 'Sea Gods Heart'

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Then again it could have been Hestia's Roman counterpart.

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Raksha God

It's possible that she has already undergone the test to inherit the godly position, and she is a powerful and bloodthirsty Shura God.}

Douluo Dalu (Soul Land): Villain Life Simulator

Douluo Dalu (Soul Land): Villain Life Simulator

Anime & Comics · Firesight

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You didnt even correct the name. Its Anna Marie (Rogue)

  At this time, he thought of something and asked again, "Bo Dr. Livar, how is the research on that naughty Rakshasa?"

American comics start with level 5 mutant

American comics start with level 5 mutant

Anime & Comics · jibrantm

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The best type MC's are pure (Pure in motivation, goals or actions).

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Weakening the magic is fine but most battles require Enginuity such as setting traps and using the environment. Since in HP anyone wizard can lose a magic duel from a single spell and most magic creatures can tank a few spells, so it's all about strategy (watch Dumbledor and Voldemort's battle in the Ministry of Magic). As for the unforgivable they dont corrupt but it requires negative emotions for them to fully use their affects. They seem corruptible because the person has to constantly call apon their negative thoughts and emotions, eventually the it becomes a habit using their negative emotions which also gives them a negative outlook/personality.

So, I was reading the comments for the recent chapter and people were roasting the mc for being weak lmao. I kinda had to agree I wanted the battle to be close with the mc repelling the monster by being clever but getting injured in the process(don't forget the magic in this verse is not as strong as the potterverse. which I think makes sense and makes it so mc isn't a godlike being. I also I didn't use the unforgivables cause I was pretty sure they corrupt your soul or something like that whenever you use them. correct me if I'm wrong on this point) But I kinda failed to do that and made the mc look super weak and not really clever at all. I also read a review saying I'm following the show too much which looking at the upcoming chapters its kinda true. so I was wondering if I should delete just the last chapter and rewrite it or delete that last chapter and rewrite the upcoming chapters or just keep it moving. I'm curious what you guys think?

A Wizard in Wednesday

A Wizard in Wednesday

TV · a_BMO

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Oh, so he is a hypocrite. Disliking OP Individuals but wanting to become an OP Individual.

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Imma just take a wild guess and say that the mysterious is that he is either a demigod, god, cosmic being or someone's avatar.

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