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welcome back .. and thx for the chapter keep going its great

i hope u slow down with time and build ur world thx for the chapter ... u skipped a lot of time .. slow down put some stories like his first mission .. take ur time

i hope u dont stick with the canon.. if u did . it will be just another name added nothing new

thx for the chapter keep it coming keep it interesting

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its ur story i dont know where u r going with it but u isolated him thx for the chapter

i love it .. thx for the chapter good work as usual

good work love the story so far .. thx for the hard work

keep going man .. thanks for the update

why not take a biju ?

as usual awesome .. keep going and plz dont rush the story take ur time u r doing a gread job

and btw don't listen to any criticism you are doing just fine with the story so far keep doing the awesome work . take your time dont be hasty with the story keep going on ur own pace

keep going man its awesome

keep going . its been a while since i saw a good story like yours

As I said be4 fights that the mc is not involved in gets boring also this is a ff not a manga so .......

a fight last for more than one chapter for other than mc gets boring so watch out btw beautiful ff