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Why keBin?

ch 107 Chapter 89: Doppelganger

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Whats this I hear about sky people?

ch 106 Chapter 88: The Early Snake Gets the Dragon

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Its the second time for mobius in this fic

"Dr. It is him, I've scanned him and he matches my records of Dr. Ein." Klein spoke and Mobius slowly came to him, shedding tears for the 1st time in her life. Even when she was born, she didn't cry and instead asked if her name was Mobius.

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Thx for the chapter! Seriously, take your time with the storyline. So that atleast it won't be as rushed as last time.

ch 98 Chapter 83: Trigger

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Only a real zhongli user will feel pain reading the first sentence.

"Osmanthus wine taste the same as I remember, but where are those that share the memory." Ein then tried to remember Ei's and Makoto's aura, but the only one left was the former as he frowned. "I see, so her sister died. Well, I'll visit her later... Maybe give her a present for that video they did. The Mei's did give me a good laugh when I showed it to them." He sighed.

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Thanks for the chapter! So.... The herscherr is not dead? The fight feels like a dragonball fight. Like Throwing rocks at each other. But on a bigger scale. IMO Ill give it a C for the effort.

ch 94 Chapter 80: Limitless Courage

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Ehh, this chapter is ok i guess. Ill give a B- for the speech. Sooo, will C.E. be more different? Or still roughly the same plot? (not saying to make a completely new plot, but add many small changes that stack up over time) A bit of a review so far: Btw, I dunno what author replied with back then. to make it clear since it wasnt that clear from wording back then. My problem with the 12th herscherr fight is not is that the result ended with them losing. But that it went nearly exactly the same way canon did. Despite the MC's influence over like what? 20+ years? Basically, the one time ein disappeared. It made it look like he had no significant effect on them at all. Made them look incompetent in comparison to canon. Like they failed all the same stat checks in canon despite ein. It would have been nice to see rin maybe block a few shots from the soldier(basically put up a bit more fight) . Or someone noticed the nukes(but cant really stop it) . You know, the little things that showed he is changing the timeline. (Its the little things that make a good story which most author don't care about, always rushing to the big action scenes) Also, the sudden power boost of the MANTIS still feels really abrupt and "deus ex machina" despite the "foreshadowings". There was not a single scene showing how they discovered the quantum ssea or imaginary space(or what they think) . Feels like the author just decided to add it at the last minute despite it we all know it not being the case. Really, as I said before. Ein did more as a soldier than a scientist. It really felt like the story would not have went any differently if he just went soldier the entire time(and be a bit creative) . (more like the only reason he went the scientist route is just to woo the girls) Scoring: Soldier: A (he actually did quite well for a soldier, and actually because he wants to save people. (most stories can't even have an MC that does this much) ) Scientist: E- (except for project odin, it didnt feel like he did anything else important. And even then in project odin, he was just heavily cheesing his adaptive body)(which is the only reason I didn't give it an F, also because most fanfic authors would fail even to do THIS much) Harem master: SSS+ (.... What did you expect? This is what most of you came to this story for. Move along...) *waves the bonkmaster 9000 threateningly* So Maybe a break chapter after the fight where Genesis and Ein chatted for a while. And genesis gave a scoring and his opinions of his run like I did. So, will the C.E. be a bit better? And not stick to canon as much? I REALLY hope the reply works this time... Thanks for the chapter!

ch 93 Chapter 79: The End of an Era

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I see, cuz I don't remember the moon blowing in canon honkai. The moon is believable. Seen weirder stuff from authors with legit mental issues which is becoming worryingly common.

After that, they saw a man with long silver hair. Swaying with the wind, but his body parts looked like they were glitching. "Yo. I'm sorry I am late everyone." He then disappeared and after a few seconds. They saw a decent chunk of the moon explode into smithereens. (pic here)

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Heyyy, where is the picture from? Which manga?

After that, they saw a man with long silver hair. Swaying with the wind, but his body parts looked like they were glitching. "Yo. I'm sorry I am late everyone." He then disappeared and after a few seconds. They saw a decent chunk of the moon explode into smithereens. (pic here)

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1500s first? Will he troll the natives? Monty python anyone? Atleast leave some "historical" incident that make everyone question the sanity of the authors.

ch 92 Chapter 78: The Savior

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ch 92 Chapter 78: The Savior

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Yes, the comms is what i want. I was thinking of a kind of morse code(almost all our modern comms are basically morse code) or using the a.i.'s help somehow. And I can't find more stuff about quantum states thing.so basically act like a ghost then. Dont know what is the difference between the two. He can interfere electrically i think at least. Also Can't aponia help here somehow? She is pretty psychic right? Some other ideas including indierectly interfering brainwaves, to communicate in his friend's dreams? Trying not to be too "out there" with my ideas. Since no one would get it.

ch 89 Chapter 75: The Multiverse

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Oh yeah since ein can still track his friend's location. Can't he figure out a way later to use that as a way to communicate? Maybe even share his new discoveries with them. So, he wont be just missing the entire time.(he has all the time in the world here since time is relative, he just have to make time) Ein in xianxia cultivation terms is figuring out how to make a personal domain. Ascension to be a true Immortal. Meditate and Comprehend the Dao. Seriously, Ein might need to flex his xianxia protagonist aura to get out of this one.

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Actually, I want to point out that contrary to what mainstream science and quantum mechanics says, the universe is not complicated or messy(complex, sure) . It actually follows very simple rules/principles(actuallly you can can reduce it down to 1 principle) . (providing evidence and proving it would take a veeerryyy Looooong essay, so i dont wanna do it here) So how ein should be tackling this problem is figure out a pattern or rule from the "mess" around him. Like cheesing a video game. So try not to brute force it like so many other fanfics and novels. He can do better. Just pointing it out. Havent watched that video in awhile(thx for reminding me what is the norm in quantum mechanics and science) . The 3rd option is somewhat right, just not complete. Information is permanent. There is no paradox. (again evidence will be pretty long) Ugh, hope the science inquisition doesnt come get me for this post.

He concluded that the sea is a pool of data that was disposed of by the imaginary tree. But the data is all jumbled up, and he has to recreate a stable space that he could use as a vessel in order to materialize himself back to his home universe. "I will have to make my own bubble universe." He started to take pieces of information from the sea to make his very own universe. Piece by piece, the most intricate puzzle to break through the depths. Or he will have to try and materialize randomly, and he doesn't have the time to do that as it might take multiple years to thousands.

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Well, time is relative anyway. He can make himself time if he needs it.

He concluded that the sea is a pool of data that was disposed of by the imaginary tree. But the data is all jumbled up, and he has to recreate a stable space that he could use as a vessel in order to materialize himself back to his home universe. "I will have to make my own bubble universe." He started to take pieces of information from the sea to make his very own universe. Piece by piece, the most intricate puzzle to break through the depths. Or he will have to try and materialize randomly, and he doesn't have the time to do that as it might take multiple years to thousands.

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First clue. Ein is like a fish thinking that it is swimming in "nothing". Time "moves" in a spiral. Everything would eventually return back to energy and start over. Energy has no form, no time. Light has to reflect something to be seen.a sea of pure energy has nothing to reflect. So its invisible. Easy to miss clue. I think honkai is "tainted energy", by the "tree" or something. I think author alluded that in genshin chapters.

"Let me show you." He felt a headache that felt like his skull would get cracked in two. As he saw realities in which they prospered for millions, even billions of years. But the sea got exhausted. As the branches of the tree started to die out, until nothing is left. A domino effect that would leave nothing behind, except him. As he floated around in dead space, completely alone as reality ceases to exist, while his endless journey in the void continues.

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Hmm, not bad. Though Ein is making a bunch of fundamental mistakes and missed important information. Shall I point some out?

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"You clearly know nothing of the potential of mankind... In just a few hundred years, we have achieved feats that would be deemed impossible in the past. Just a mere speck on the amount of time the universe has existed. Just decades since the honkai plagued the lands, and we've already begun to use it extensively. What makes you think that we can't start to manipulate reality in a small amount of time?" Ein quickly dived into the abyss as the entity tried to bind him, but he has already disappeared in a quick burst of speed. Swallowed up by the sea of quanta to its deepest parts.