we need moreeeeeee Come back with more updates please!
are these chapters going to get fixed sometime?
ch 770 The Snowy Mountain Range.
Sci-fi · MidGard
using squared units for a measurement of space does not really make sense... cubic is the unit used for volume, which is also the way we usually measure space...
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Book&Literature · Ashtar29
No problem dear author. So long as you are not actually dropping the story and keep uploading on a semi-regular basis (i can even accept once a month if it gets to that point) then it's all good to me. Great story so far so just try to keep it up and not rush into things.
ch 25 Not a Chapter (Sorry)
Anime & Comics · Jonatan1165
I will only say that if you are paying them for this they're not deserving the money. Your own writing was much better and I think I speak for all us readers when we say the quality has been dropping. I will still keep reading it for the plot but am now honestly looking forward to volume 3 more than the rest of these chapters xd
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Anime & Comics · Navy_King
the sword was used to seal someone into an illusion of eternal drunken slumber in the wine gourd right? So make the test related to alcohol & illusion somehow. tests of willpower are always a safe bet for this kinda stuff as well x)
Need ideas for how to create a trial/test to select whether Uchiha Itachi is worthy of obtaining Sword of Totsuka.
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
Still you should have poliwhirl for option A if you want it to be correct. Right now it's A water > water, B grass/poison > grass/poison C grass/poison > grass/poison and D bug/poison > bug/poison
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Anime & Comics · RK9
Just pointing out for you that it's spelled 'lightning', not 'lightening'. If you add the 'e' it means to make something lighter, or make it weigh less. lightning as in thunder is spelled without the e. Just pointing it out now since i figure this character will be mentioned more often in the future and having it spelled wrong like 10 times in a chapter could get bothersome for some readers:p
ch 14 Lightning God + Mistake = Reborn
Games · IZU
Try not to overuse the word 'well' in your sentences when writing. Just a piece of advice to make your story flow better, keep up the good work though! Loving the story so far.
I used the money to buy some clothes and well get a nice room in an inn. I entered the inn and well the renter was a woman( yes easier to manipulate)
Book&Literature · Maniacss
After organizing his thoughts he went to bed to sleep. In his dream, he dreamt of pokemon appearing in our world.
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Anime & Comics · ColoredWorm
At first, he did not want to see Galarian Farfetch'd in Ash's team but with this episode, he started to like it. He is impatient to see Sirfetch'd in the anime now. Also, in his opinion, in the next few episodes, Galarian Farfetch'd should evolve into Sirfetch'd. I'm just going to go through each line and try to fix all your grammar & spelling mistakes in case you want to take the time to adjust it. I like the story but prefer reading with 100% correct English.
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Anime & Comics · ColoredWorm
You need to get a beta reader to fix a bunch of mistyped names and errors in your story. That said, the quality of the story itself is alright if you exclude those obvious errors and the pace is nice too.
[Naruto]Sunagakure Legends:Genin's Comeback
Anime & Comics · BlackSheep9