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Thanks for the chapter. Funny thing is though, the foxy arc isn't filler it's cannon

One thing I never got was why did Madara keep his lack of eyes, but not his old age?

I'm sure that was still a pretty big part of it. Or at least in his aspirations in creating Ultron to "defend" Earth.

Unsure if this is what they were going for, but the entire plot of civil war and ultron were caused by Tony's PTSD. Without that event, none of his more advanced creations will be "needed", including vision. This will likely cause drastic changes, for better or worse, by the time infinity war arrives.

Except they are currently in a dangerous city. Though tbh, the MC is being idiotic. The ideal strategy would be to change cities, it's not that hard. Hop on a bus or train, they now have the money for it. They could then train safety until they reach a reasonable strength level, before using the points. Instead they stay in the city, and not use their only strength, there stat points. Without plot armour, they should be dead.

I really don't get the MCs mentality. If they are so horrified by Gotham, why not idk... move to a new city? Like it's not that hard, grind up thief skills in a more normal city (by DC standards), then return later if need be.

Cringe

The Akatsuki was founded in the rain village, not the water village. In fact the rain village is furthest away from the water village compared to the other big 4.

Considering yoriichi is still alive in this time period, there are a few inconsistencies: How do they know the mark kills, they sound young so he couldn't have invented the breathing styles long enough ago to know Secondly, how is it such a big organisation at this point, again it should be a very new thing. Are hashiras even a thing yet?

Tbh I probably will continue till the end of the arc, but this sin vault is getting fairly repetitive and annoying

Depending on how this goes, probably going to drop this soon

Ngl, really annoyed you went the memory erasure route. If you wanted him to remove the curse sooner, there are better ways to do it

Tbh, while it is OP and hard to write good fight scenes with, that fight should have ended with the first punch. The MC as a vampiric pillar man can literally just walk through the demon while absorbing him in an instant.

n̶e̶e̶d̶ *nerf

Lol that's not how it works, the only alternative is to use hashirama cells to boost your healing, so you heal your eyes faster than they degrade. The nine tails would work in the same way

As cool as a Mangekyou Sharingan is, I've got to wonder what he will do about the inevitable blindness. Obito had hashirama cells to heal his eyes, and unless Naruto can regain kurama for healing he won't have vision for too much longer...

One of, if not the best MCU fanfic I've read. Thanks for the journey, and good luck with future projects! Also thanks for not nerfing Loki even if you lost enthusiasm, it is usually really annoying for readers.

Thanks for the chapter, probably going to let you stock up with chapters for a while before I continue. I really dislike the reappearing of the sin vault, seemed kinda unneeded. Especially because he is still under the effects the curse. Love this too much to drop it, so I'll give it a while and then binge my way through it.