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.....MC fought Bai He before he obtained the wooden sword, why did it change that Bai He lost to the wooden sword. Author need to stop missing up facts in his own story. Aside from that, decent so far.

ended like the author was tired of writing it.. enjoyed the story, but know I am annoyed I spent money on it for the way it ended. really hope there is a book 2, after all, technically his just scratching the surface....

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza