JarvisB

JarvisB

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2017-10-12 Joined Myanmar (Burma)
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JarvisB
JarvisB
1 years ago
Commented

Is this book drop already?

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JarvisB
1 years ago
Commented

I am getting scared of reading many chapters everyday 😔

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JarvisB
JarvisB
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chap x2

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JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Replied to PinkCulture

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JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Commented

Starting to afraid instead of happy. Afraid you will drop the novel after all chapters.

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JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Replied to Dayside

Exactly. I personally don't mind reading 3-4 chapter in one go and wait few days to recharge

JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Commented

Too much chapter about side characters, I think you should reduce those chapters and put it in the end of the arc. Now I am even starting to confuse which one is MC and which one is not. I do appreciate it's to build up the world but it's too much right now. Or you could say sth like this Greystones (North of --- Kingdom, 500 mil away from where), so reader can understand Ohh this location is a bit near/far from MC. Maybe he should be careful. As of now I am starting to confuse everything. there's pirate attack somewhere? An Priestess having affair somewhere? A princess scheming somewhere? and MC is doing something? Too much info dump right now. If some aren't going to appear now then you can just put their chapter only right before it appear and make it like "5 months ago".

JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

JarvisB
JarvisB
3 years ago
Commented

You are welcome ☺️

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