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to much nonsense..this is fanfic..not some science knowledge

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priest..pray for us...exacly the same plot..around 80% sampe story build

25cm..seriously??human or horse😅😅

kill sakura plis..at least cripple her

such a slow Pace..never traine his spesial ability at all..boring

reduce the number of OP ability plis..this story already have enought power to overthrow the world it self..all in all this is a good OP fanfic power..the story is good to..now u need to integrated haki..

so lame..to many monolog..

this is good

so many unfamiliar word

why take so long to up 1 chap..and so short too

gender Bender ?

li cha or Richard??

awesome..with some humorr..my stone for u

yeah i know..this is just an input for u ok..no offence..i respect ur story,,truly..but u see..this is about Naruto..not some kingdom building..while u want to make it dark..it no longer funny..u make Hinata full deceit and manipulation that no longer look like she love Naruto..she just want to use him..not mention the other.. u make her quiet OP..and yet she hide behind others..now the story bcome just about a psycopath Hinata..bordering megalomania..thats why i said no longer fun.. remember the basic..this is Naruto..

already this far..but still such a lame MC..this is getting boring

another Harem..

ridicilous story

good story but wasting time..wasting time with his progress..

hais..such a short chap