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“Else” suffered a jolt~ nein, “Agatha” suffered a jolt, please fix grammatical and naming errors.

Embolons, Tharm, Nightangale stopped????

There are grammar errors here and there.

He still can’t win fro m star.

Ughh ikr.

As in church......

I’m not sure aswell, previously it was said that she used gu to transmit what she wants to expres, it should be something psychic, but here she is clearly speaking

This author is full of crap.

Ughh, it’s like Fang Yuan is becoming more retarded by the day smh, too much time is already invested in this novel, I’ll continue on reading.

pegasi ughhh

The author keeps on stressing on no regrets sheesh. Yeah I get it, please don’t waste word count on that, don’t frickin explain the same thing again and again since chapter 1. He was average in his previous life, neither being happy nor accomplished. This life, he doesn’t know how to use his resources. He’s still learning I guess. I would never get the age novels like this give to the characs. 500-40000 years old. Hah, it would have been much more interesting with normal ages. The author can’t construct the mentality of different age groups properly.

Boring

Them Chinese and their dishes, and then fang yuan got corona smh

Sheesh, the extra filler information is annoying, just get on with the story author. Every time the author breaks from the story, it wastes more time. Like heck we care about the extra info. On with story of this charming human.

Why is he asking himself such useless questions, yeah, time stopping he experienced previously is so normal and possible. However they couldn’t have moved him without him realising ughhh. A bit is ok but your overdoing it.

Please get a proofreader.

You can try to think of it as another reality he enters instead. Something like the hyperbolic time chamber in DBZ I guess. I hope I’m right 😂

You need a proofreader but the start has me hooked.

Yeah, that was annoying as heck. At least I have tried these dishes 😂