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ThrustThunder: "Adapting to society is another realistic thing one must learn."
Perhaps you've forgotten the beginning of this story where the MC has *Already* lived an entire life where he didn't need to "Adapt to society", because Society had already failed him so much it drove him down a dark hole of despair!
And I would have *Loved* your idea of him going to the second school. Arrogant Nobles as Antagonists that he needs to overcome with skill and cunning would have been so much more interesting/in character for Lith. The Author still could have used the same story points of him learning healing magic and taking deadly tests. But instead of allies he has to carry, it's enemies he has to out maneuver to survive!

Supreme Magus · C78
7 hours ago

ThrustThunder: I think your comprehension on what an *OPINION* is needs some work.
I said I don't like the way the story is going, that is my personal belief and has nothing to do with how or why the Author decided to take his novel.
I don't need to ~Understand~ that the Person cooking my food is going through his "Avant Garde Phase" to say that I don't want to eat the Soy infused turnip roots he served me when I ordered Rib-eye of the Menu.
If you were happily watching a Horror movie and halfway through the director decided they were going to turn it into a Romantic Comedy, you'd also be understandably upset about the complete tonal shift and derailment of a story you were previously engrossed in. Or vice-versa and the Rom-Com you were just crying too suddenly had it's entire main cast suddenly murdered in front of you might make you a bit upset that the narrative you had just spent an hour enjoying had been completely destroyed all for the sake of the Author's "Creative Freedom" to change his mind.

Supreme Magus · C78
7 hours ago

ThrustThunder: I'm talking about in the Meta. As us, the Author and the reader perceive it.
During the second day of training you had the MC get punished for going all out with the reasoning "You wont learn anything that way."
This arc you have the MC not allowed to go all out, so I as a reader took it as you once again saying "He should be learning something from this experience."
"What he should be learning" appears to be to be less cynical, more sociable and to better think on his feet when he finds himself in situations where he cant use his OP abilities. And all three of those things are the exact *Opposite* reasons I love Lith.
Like I said, reading the first 50 chapters where Lith is a snarky, genre savvy Murder Hobo was a breath of fresh air after all the bland generic protagonists who just warp their personalities to whatever the plot demands of them.
But now, since the start of the School Arc, Lith has stifled himself so much he's forgetting what has kept him alive for this long, and what has kept him interesting as a character for so long. He's trying to maintain his cover so much that he's more fake then real at this point and reading about such a fake character isn't as fun as reading about the Leylin's little brother I've come to love.

Supreme Magus · C78
7 hours ago
I would like if someone tells me what does this mean?
'Since your surname is Ou, why is it followed by Yang? Isn't that just a trap...' View More
Immortal Path to Heaven · C26
2 days ago

Hnn17: Zhang hanyu is only equal to 3 piggies, how many piggies does his uncle equals to ? This is an entire new way to measure bad guys.

Arrogant but useless young master- 5 piggies. Jade like beauty white lotus equals ?

Immortal Path to Heaven · C13
2 days ago

Primo: Yes, this is same novel named as History's Strongest Husband.

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws · C25
2 days ago
Yes, this is same novel named as History's Strongest Husband. View More

Alphasa: Is so bizarre, I have the disturbing sensation of deja vu. I feel that I have already read this somewhere.

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws · C25
2 days ago
I think other name of this novel is named History's Strongest Husband. View More
History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws · C3
2 days ago

Primo: "They retaliated and we had to use force." Simple word play. This happens even in modern age. Not to mention times novel's time-line. There isn't much difference.

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws · C22
2 days ago
"They retaliated and we had to use force." Simple word play. This happens even in modern age. Not to mention times novel's time-line. There isn't much difference. View More

Oto: “He was doing something completely legal, as he had the notice of arrest”

I’m not sure what the author thinks arrest means, but murder and arrest are quite different.

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws · C22
2 days ago

Kyoang: Incubus, just want to be the smart nerdy guy who corrects everything

Mini World Of Endless Fun Awaits · C28
1 week ago

Taku: Just wait until he has farming simulator, he will end world hunger

Mini World Of Endless Fun Awaits · C10
1 week ago

Henki: TDG fanfics that don't do copy-paste can be count on one's hand.
Thanks for the chapter, and keep the good work :)

How Much For Your Soul? · C8
1 week ago

EatDatPussy445: Handjobs are so dumb. like b*tch, u think you can beat my dick better than me?

The World after the Fall · C9
1 month ago

Zerak: Honestly at this point I just skim most of the sex in this story. Ein is amazing at writing a good story but his erotica writing can be improved (If he wants his books to be semi erotica that is) or he should just imply that sex happens.

As often in this story I feel like the sex is delaying the story. Instead of enhancing the reading experience, usually it isn’t an issue, but the gap between the quality of the general story (which high) and the sex bits (which is okay I guess) makes it feel like it’s a chore to get through even if it’s well written.

BTW I am saying this because I know that Ein is using this book to improve his writing, so constructive criticism or at least one person’s view of the story should be helpful.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C1459
1 month ago

Shabba: Wtf does this guy bathe in 4 leaf clovers every morning?

Low Dimensional Game · C76
2 months ago

Great_Y: Raven: You're a wizard harry.

Low Dimensional Game · C62
2 months ago

elibrocubicularist: "It's not immoral if no one is watching."
...and if someone is watching, into the scroll they go! Now it's not immoral again!

Low Dimensional Game · C16
2 months ago

vabrasanu: I would say naming some weak swords Durandal and Excalibur is a bit excessive.

Guild Wars · C3
2 months ago

Djacked: Please don't make her a love interest. Ryuuna is just a more vicious and crueler version of Saht. Ryunna has become what she hates, someone who believes 'Might makes right', with no mercy. The ONLY reason she spared him was because she was curious about him and even then before she heard Linnaeus story she intended to use him as a gopher and maybe kill him off later. Even now she intended to have him killed by the weather cuz she felt insulted. I've read too many stories where the protaganist has morals but are blind to 'evil' actions simply cuz they're friends or lovers, don't go that road plz.

Babel · C31
3 months ago

Asura_Vajra: Vahn: There's nothing you can't buy in the shop

Random Person: Your daughter's hand in marriage?

Vahn: Theres one thing you can't buy in the shop.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C1298
3 months ago

anonymous_daoist: HALF A MINUTE CHAMPION!
Best Headline.

Forty Millenniums of Cultivation · C93
4 months ago

Daoist_WorldPillar: "what you're seeing now is my normal state. this is a super saiyan. and this. this is what is known as a super saiyan that has ascended above a super saiyan. or, you could just call this a super saiyan two.

AND THIS IS TO GO EVEN FURTHER BEYOND"

Forty Millenniums of Cultivation · C84
4 months ago

CKtalon: Here's 16 chapters for getting to #2. And since it's not sustainable, I'll be lowering the benchmark to #4, which each higher rank equivalent to 3 chapters:
#3: 3 chapters
#2: 6 chapters
#1: 9 chapters

Lord of the Mysteries · C844
4 months ago

Jackodaniels: Lol, will Klein finally maybe possibly spend a night with a lady? If he maintains his virginity throughout this novel Roselle will be lampooning him as a senior wherever he is.

Lord of the Mysteries · C817
4 months ago

TrueBlue: Lol Klein is so traumatized that he suspects every lady that flirts with him to be a demoness.

Lord of the Mysteries · C817
4 months ago

Alessan: Current Stash:
~15199 Pounds

Dark Emperor Card (Priceless)

Sea God Scepter (Lots)

Corrupted Tinder (???)

Azik’s Copper Whistle (N/A)

Creeping Hunger (37500 Pounds|20000 Pounds + Characteristics inside)
- 1x Interrogator Characteristic (1500 Pounds)
- 1x Baron of Corruption Characteristic (4000 Pounds)
- 1x Zombie Characteristic
- (4000 Pounds)
- 1x Desire Apostle Characteristic (8000 Pounds)

1x Priest of Light Characteristic (8000 Pounds)

Biological Poison Bottle (~3000
Pounds?)

Midsummer aka Sun Brooch (2000 Pounds)

1x Nightmare Characteristic (1500 Pounds

1x Interrogator Characteristic (From Capim, 1500 Pounds)

1x Lunatic Characteristic (650 Pounds)

15ml Thousand Faced Hunter’s Blood (45 Pounds)

= ~69,400 Pounds + Dark Emperor Card + Sea God Scepter + Corrupted Tinder

Lord of the Mysteries · C700
6 months ago

Alessan: Known Potion Names: 140/220
Known Potion Formulas: 30/220 + 1 incomplete

8-9 Low Sequence Names: 41/44 (13 Formulas)
5-7 Mid Sequence Names: 60/66 (12 Formulas)
3-4 Saint Names: 22/44 (2 Formulas +1 incomplete)
1-2 Angel Names: 7/44 (2 Formulas)
0 True God Names: 5/22 (1 Formula)
Unsure: 5

[] = Ancient Name
✓ = Known Formula
X = Known Incomplete Formula
* = Mid Sequence Starting Point

Corruption Pathway: (10/10)
9 Lawyer ✓
8 Barbarian ✓
7 Briber ✓
6 Baron of Corruption* ✓
5 Mentor of Confusion ✓
4 Count of the Fallen ✓
3 Frenzied Mage ✓
2 Duke of Entropy ✓
1 Prince of Disorder ✓
0 Dark Emperor ✓

[Devil] Abyss Pathway: (7/10)
9 Criminal
8 Unwinged Angel [Coldblooded]
7 Serial Killer
6 Devil*
5 Desire Apostle
4 Demon
3
2
1
0 Abyss

[Dragon] Dreamer Pathway: (8/10)
9 Spectator ✓
8 Telepathist ✓
7 Psychiatrist* [Psyche Analyst]
6 Hypnotist
5
4 Manipulator
3
2 Discerner
1 Author
0 Visionary

Creation Pathway: (7/10)
9 Savant
8 Archaeologist
7 Appraiser
6 Machinery Specialist [Artisan]*
5 Astromancer
4 Alchemist
3 Arcane Scholar

Deception Pathway: (7/10)
9 Seer ✓
8 Clown ✓
7 Magician* ✓
6 Faceless ✓
5 Nimblewright Master ✓
4 Bizarro Sorcerer
3
2 Miracle Invoker

Demoness Pathway: (7/10)
9 Assassin ✓
8 Instigator ✓
7 Witch* ✓
6 Pleasure ✓
5 Affliction
4 Demoness of Despair
2-3 Unaging Demoness

[Elf] Hurricane Pathway: (7/10)
9 Sailor [Keeper of the Sea]
8 Folk of Rage [Guardian of the Storm]
7 Seafarer [Storm Priest]
6 Wind-Blessed* ✓
5 Ocean Songster [Elvish Songster]
4 Cataclysmic Interrer
3 Sea King

Order Pathway: (7/10)
9 Arbiter
8 Sheriff
7 Interrogator
6 Judge*
5 Disciplinary Paladin
3-4 Law Weaver (Likely 4)
3-4 Imperative Mage (Likely 3)

Sun Pathway (7/10)
9 Bard ✓
8 Light Suppliant ✓
7 Solar High Priest* ✓
6 Notary ✓
5 Priest of Light [Envoy of Light] ✓
4 Unshadowed X (Main ingredients only)
3
2
1
0 Sun

War Pathway: (7/10)
9 Hunter
8 Provoker
7 Pyromaniac [Fire Mage]
6 Conspiracist*
5 Reaper
4 Iron-Blooded Knight
3
2
1
0 Red Priest

[Giant] Combat Pathway: (6/10)
9 Warrior
8 Pugilist [Gladiator]
7 Weapon Master
6 Dawn Paladin*
5 Guardian
4 Demon Hunter

[Phoenix] Death Pathway: (6/10)
9 Cor**e Collector
8 Gravedigger
7 Spirit Medium
6 Spirit Guide*
5 Gatekeeper
3-4 Undying (Almost certainly 3)

Journey Pathway: (6/10)
9 Apprentice ✓
8 Trickmaster ✓
7 Astrologer ✓
6 Scribe*
5 Traveler
4 Secrets Sorcerer

[Vampire] Moon Pathway: (6/10)
9 Apothecary ✓
8 Beast Tamer
7 Vampire*
6 Potions Professor
5 Scarlet Scholar
4 Shaman King

[Mutant] Mutant Pathway: (6/10)
9 Prisoner
8 Lunatic
7 Werewolf*
6 Zombie
5 Wraith
4 Puppet

Mystery Pathway: (6/10)
9 Mystery Pryer
8 Melee Scholar
7 Warlock*
6 Scrolls Professor
5 Constellations Master
4 Mysticologist

[Demonic Wolf] Night Pathway: (6/10)
9 Sleepless
8 Midnight Poet
7 Nightmare
6 Soul Assurer*
5
4 Nightwatcher

Thief Pathway: (6/10)
9 Marauder
8 Swindler
7 Cryptologist
6 Fire Bandit
5 Dream Stealer
4 Parasite

Fate Pathway: (5/10)
9 Monster
8
7 The Lucky
6
5 Winner
4
3
2 Soothsayer
1 Snake of Mercury

Secrets Pathway: (5/10)
9 Secrets Supplicant
8 Listener [Whispered]
7 Shadow Ascetic
6 Rose Bishop
5 Shepherd

Sage Pathway: (4/10)
9 Reader
8
7 Knowledge Keeper
6 Polymath*
5 Mysticism Magister

Life Pathway: (2/10)
9 Planter
? Doctor [Healing Pastor] (Likely Low or Mid Sequence)

Unknown Pathways: (3)
4 Prophet (Likely Reader Pathway, possibly Secrets Pathway)

? Planeswalker (Almost certainly High Sequence, Likely Journey Pathway)

? Weather Warlock (Likely Saint Level)

Known Pathway Connections:

Hurricane|Sun|Sage|Secrets|Dreamer

Deception|Journey|Thief

Night|Combat|Death

Craftsmanship|Mystery

Demoness|War

Abyss|Mutant

Lord of the Mysteries · C700
6 months ago
Well since outsiders can get in it, you can can also say beasts might randomly go in and can't go out. Or they have a deal with empire in exchange for honing them. View More

Wabafet: How do they have magical beasts?

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C295
6 months ago

kcorny: Bruh. Never tell the guy without any attachments that the required breath to rise to divine ranks is enough to suck a country dry.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C293
6 months ago
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