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Something was wrong? Head disintegration appears!

Something was wrong. Something was wrong.

My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion

Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy

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BTW Craig is a scottish name....

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This story is different enough to set itself aside from the usual. The "prediction/manipulation" ability based on mathematics is a good creation. Sadly, it ignores the whole random aspect of the universe and tries to suggest that everything can be calculated, which predictions ignore the greater chaos the further you go from the source. Its taken a thought from the "butterfly effect" and solidified it. As a story, I look forward to the further development and will continue reading. Well worth a view.

I Can Create Perfect Accidents.

Urban · Comfortably Trippy

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Thanks for letting us know whats happening. Although I usually dislike the premium system, in the case of this story so far it is justified. ie I am happy to pay the points to read it. :)

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