Flaamwing - Profile

Kage didn't exist back then. But thanks for the story.

Thanks for the chapter. You keep using "fill" in place of "feel" however please look them up.

Thanks for the chapter. But please stop using "agents" for "against".

You need fire hot enough to soften metal, not melt (that's casting not forging) or burn it. Thermite is too hot

Reviled means hated. I think you mean Revealed which is newly shown.

Ending by saying it was the last time you would see her is bad writing, as it's authorial foretelling rather than in story portends. Also, rewriting some of the earlier chapters is fine to do but never do them before you finish the story otherwise you end up burning out. Way too many authors have tried it, and they end up frustrated because they are rehashing old stuff when they really want to put out new stuff. It's just not worth the risk until the first draft is done

should be self defense, or defense of others. also inhabitants to humanity, after all some aliens may have invaded and started to live on earth, and they have no problems killing of humans.

the whole reason its covered is to keep it disabled. it cant see through things, which breaks this whole chapter.