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Great story! Characters are well developed and they all have relevance to the story. Not much world building as of yet but can see potential for it. The relationshios are intriguing no real dull moments. Only two improvements would be the grammer is a little off and some spelling mistakes but they can be easily figured out and the other being when there is a start of a new chapter it rehashes the previous one just in different wording for a good chunk of it. One thing I would like to know is if authour is going to continue this book?

This story had potential but the author is very inconsistent with many things lIke how many dragons he has or forgetting enitre Events that happend with no explanation and just keeps on going with new content that doesn’ make sense. I’v heard there is a similar book out there don’t know what it’s called but maybe give that a try. Might come back to read if auther ever fixes the mistakes.

I have the same issues. How can he forget about hAlf the dragons he had and only write about the other two until he got the newest one

Story is ok kind of rinse and repeat at this point (ch80). op army find enemy kill enemy get resources night comes kill again sell gains in market get stronger new enemies come. Couple thi that bother me was what happened to the blue and red dragons he summoned and how did the earth dragons all of a sudden jump to 24 from having 19 plus some of them died. No explanation for either case. There is also some questionable math happening in upgrade cost when he needed 5000 energy stones and 50 crystals it all of a sudden became 5 crystals and not sure how many stones. MC is a little scared for my taste since all he does is sit in the castle and hasn’t explored himself at all so far.

Great story so far, no action or much fighting so far but the build up if the story has been great. This has the potential to be amazing. Basicall about a old guy from earth sent to a 16 year old body with a tavern system. Gets quests meets interesting people is a simple explanation. Here hasnt been much of rinse and repeat at least not to the point that you can’ stand it. Try it out

I was feelin dejavu reading this now I know why!

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Please see the picture about my review. There are spoilers in it but hope they make you want to read it more. This is ny firSt read if this type if book and i couldn’t get enough, wish this was one of those books that just keeps going. Authour if you can ever keep writing this story and like any if my ideas I would love to share more and hope to see you write about some and sorry I dont often leave comments but felt i had ti for this book and the keyboard blocked the spoiler button never knew it was there.

One of the best books ive read. Has magic, academy, multiple planets,medieval earth. MC is smart not op or plot armoured. So far the stOry isnt repetative like others where mc gets power up defeats everyone meets new tougher guy rinse repeat. Only wish is for more chapters.

Great story about a kid from medival times that gets a chance to learn magic and explore the universe. Slow paced but it works With the way the author Is wtiting. nice to see a book where mc isnt op almost from the start. You can see the possibility and where he can end up but the journey so far is well thought out. spoiler Next Hope the dragon sequency wont just be a time skip and mc is now op when the Rest of his classmates remain behind